Monday, November 28, 2016

Won Hyeong Kim / Vocal Variey (If something disappeared from the world) / Wednesday 56

4 comments:

  1. Title : If something disappeared from the world
    Evaluator : Won Hyeong Kim
    Date : 16. 11. 28

    • Topic Selection: _o_Facilitated vocal variety __Satisfactory __Could Improve
    • Volume: _o_Excellent __Satisfactory __Too loud or soft
    • Rate: __Excellent, varied _o_Satisfactory __Too fast or too slow
    • Pitch: _o_Varied conversational __Satisfactory __Monotonous, artificial
    • Quality: __Pleasant, friendly _o_Satisfactory __Harsh, monotonous
    • Pauses: _o_Appropriate, effective __Satisfactory __Could Improve
    • Expressiveness: _o_Conveyed emotion, meaning __Satisfactory __Could Improve
    • Vocal Variety: _o_Enhanced speech __Satisfactory __Could Improve
    • Organization: __Logical flow of ideas _o_Satisfactory __Should Improve
    • Word Usage: _o_Vivid, descriptive, accurate __Satisfactory __Could Improve
    • Body Language: _o_Natural, expressive __Satisfactory __Unnatural, distracting


    • What could the speaker have done differently to make the speech more effective?

    In "Quality" aspect, I think it is little bit weak at conveying emotions.
    In "Rate" aspect, my speech is not fast. So it can be boring for audiences.
    In "Pitch" aspect, I tried my best, but I think I should have used much bigger fluctuations in my speech.


    • What did you like about the speech?

    My PPT slides are easy and concise.
    Topic is fresh and easy to understand for audiences.
    I used my body language many times.
    My voice was clear and I could convey my words exactly.

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  2. Title: If something disappeared from the world
    Evaluator: Youngho Chun
    Date: November 28, 2016


    • Topic Selection: _o_Facilitated vocal variety __Satisfactory __Could Improve
    • Volume: _o_Excellent __Satisfactory __Too loud or soft
    • Rate: _o_Excellent, varied __Satisfactory __Too fast or too slow
    • Pitch: _o_Varied conversational __Satisfactory __Monotonous, artificial
    • Quality: _o_Pleasant, friendly __Satisfactory __Harsh, monotonous
    • Pauses: _o_Appropriate, effective __Satisfactory __Could Improve
    • Expressiveness: __Conveyed emotion, meaning _ o _Satisfactory __Could Improve
    • Vocal Variety: _o_Enhanced speech __Satisfactory __Could Improve
    • Organization: _o_Logical flow of ideas __Satisfactory __Should Improve
    • Word Usage: _o_Vivid, descriptive, accurate __Satisfactory __Could Improve
    • Body Language: __Natural, expressive _o_Satisfactory __Unnatural, distracting

    • What could the speaker have done differently to make the speech more effective?
    It would be great if he used more body language and facial expression. Though he used some, I think it will be a lot better his topic would be more specific to the audience.

    • What did you like about the speech?
    I like his material for speech. Examples are familiar, I could focus more deeply. I think others would feel the same. Also his delivery was good

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  3. Title: If something disappeared from the world
    Evaluator: Do Yeon Kim
    Date: November 28, 2016


    • Topic Selection: _o_Facilitated vocal variety __Satisfactory __Could Improve
    • Volume: _o_Excellent __Satisfactory __Too loud or soft
    • Rate: _o_Excellent, varied __Satisfactory __Too fast or too slow
    • Pitch: __Varied conversational _0_Satisfactory __Monotonous, artificial
    • Quality: _o_Pleasant, friendly __Satisfactory __Harsh, monotonous
    • Pauses: _o_Appropriate, effective __Satisfactory __Could Improve
    • Expressiveness: __Conveyed emotion, meaning _ o _Satisfactory __Could Improve
    • Vocal Variety: __Enhanced speech _0_Satisfactory __Could Improve
    • Organization: _o_Logical flow of ideas __Satisfactory __Should Improve
    • Word Usage: _o_Vivid, descriptive, accurate __Satisfactory __Could Improve
    • Body Language: __Natural, expressive _o_Satisfactory __Unnatural, distracting

    • What could the speaker have done differently to make the speech more effective?
    It would be great if he had more words to describe the movie at first. His could have used more body language and facial expression. I think it will be a lot better if he used his own experience.

    • What did you like about the speech?
    I like the topic of his speech. Although I don't like drinking alchohol but his story grabbed my attention. And I liked his last statement that think about this topic and cherish the memory that people take for granted.

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  4. Title: If something disappeard from the World.
    Evaluator: Jisu Kim
    Date: November 29, 2016
    • Topic Selection: _o_Facilitated vocal variety __Satisfactory __Could Improve
    • Volume: _o __Excellent _ _Satisfactory __Too loud or soft
    • Rate: _o__Excellent, varied __Satisfactory __Too fast or too slow
    • Pitch: __Varied conversational _o_Satisfactory __Monotonous, artificial
    • Quality: _o_Pleasant, friendly __Satisfactory __Harsh, monotonous
    • Pauses: _o_Appropriate, effective __Satisfactory __Could Improve
    • Expressiveness: __Conveyed emotion, meaning _o_Satisfactory __Could Improve
    • Vocal Variety: _o_Enhanced speech __Satisfactory __Could Improve
    • Organization: _o_Logical flow of ideas __Satisfactory __Should Improve
    • Word Usage: __Vivid, descriptive, accurate _o_Satisfactory __Could Improve
    • Body Language: _o_Natural, expressive __Satisfactory __Unnatural, distracting


    • What could the speaker have done differently to make the speech more effective?
    :More various visual aids would be good. I think that the more various visual aids are necessary especially after the middle point of the presentation.

    • What did you like about the speech?
    : The topic of his speech was quite interesting. Also his topic and his intention of speech would be really helpful to many people including me. Lastly, starting the speech by introducing a movie related to his topic made me pay attention to his speech. This way of starting a speech is quite effective and I like it.

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