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Jeonghee Lee 201502585 Vocal Variety Presentation / The Horrible Experience that Changed Everything
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Jeonghee Lee 201502585 Vocal Variety Presentation / The Horrible Experience that Changed Everything
Evaluation Guide for
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Title: The Horrible Experience that Changed Everything
Evaluator:JeongheeLee
Date: November 27. 2016
• Topic Selection: Facilitated vocal variety
• Volume: Excellent
• Rate: Excellent, varied
• Pitch: Varied conversational
• Quality: Pleasant, friendly
• Pauses: Appropriate, effective
• Expressiveness: Conveyed emotion, meaning
• Vocal Variety: Enhanced speech
• Organization: Satisfactory
• Word Usage: Could Improve
• Body Language: Natural, expressive
• What could the speaker have done differently to make the speech more effective?
I think it would've been better if I had made better word choices and used grammatically correct sentences. Even though I had practiced a lot and had memorized everything on the script, I was really nervous when I was taking the video and forgot a few lines. Thus I had to say little bit differently from the script and I made a few mistakes. I think I should practice using better words and saying sentences correctly when I have conversations in English.
• What did you like about the speech?
I think I did use a variety vocal skills while giving a presentation. I thinkg I used a loud voice with proper pitch, intonation and stresses, which was quite pleasing to listen to. Also, I used pauses properly and pausing is what I've improved most from the last get to the point presentation. Because the topic was related to my experience, I could add my emotions and my thoughts were well reflected to the speech. I think I also used lots of proper body gestures and facial expressions.
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Title: The Horrible Experience that Changed Everything
Evaluator: Heo Hoon Young Date: November 27th, 2016
•Topic Selection: _o_Facilitated vocal variety __Satisfactory __Could Improve
•Volume: _o_Excellent __Satisfactory __Too loud or soft
•Rate: _o_Excellent, varied __Satisfactory __Too fast or too slow
•Pitch: _o_Varied conversational __Satisfactory __Monotonous, artificial
•Quality: _o_Pleasant, friendly __Satisfactory __Harsh, monotonous
•Pauses: __Appropriate, effective __Satisfactory _o_Could Improve
•Expressiveness: _o_Conveyed emotion, meaning __Satisfactory __Could Improve
•Vocal Variety: _o_Enhanced speech __Satisfactory __Could Improve
•Organization: __Logical flow of ideas _o_Satisfactory __Should Improve
•Word Usage: __Vivid, descriptive, accurate _o_Satisfactory __Could Improve
•Body Language: _o_Natural, expressive __Satisfactory __Unnatural, distracting
• What could the speaker have done differently to make the speech more effective?
It was excellent presentation, it would have been better for speaker to
make presentation more brief by shortening some of her dialogues in telling
her own experiences and avoid repetition.
• What did you like about the speech?
She has effective hand gesture enhancing her expression and emotion, her
pronunciation is classic and balanced eye-contact with all the audiences
Her visual aids was picture based and it was really cooperating with her
content in the speech, also liked the strong narratives she included in
the presentation.
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Title: The Horrible Experience that Changed Everything
Evaluator: Kyeong Ju Seo Date: November 28th, 2016
•Topic Selection: _o_Facilitated vocal variety __Satisfactory __Could Improve
•Volume: _o_Excellent __Satisfactory __Too loud or soft
•Rate: _o_Excellent, varied __Satisfactory __Too fast or too slow
•Pitch: _o_Varied conversational __Satisfactory __Monotonous, artificial
•Quality: _o_Pleasant, friendly __Satisfactory __Harsh, monotonous
•Pauses: __Appropriate, effective _ㅇ_Satisfactory __Could Improve
•Expressiveness: _o_Conveyed emotion, meaning __Satisfactory __Could Improve
•Vocal Variety: _o_Enhanced speech __Satisfactory __Could Improve
•Organization: __Logical flow of ideas _o_Satisfactory __Should Improve
•Word Usage: __Vivid, descriptive, accurate _o_Satisfactory __Could Improve
•Body Language: _o_Natural, expressive __Satisfactory __Unnatural, distracting
• What could the speaker have done differently to make the speech more effective?
She gave a great speech about her experience but the speech went over 7 minutes so maybe she could have made it a little shorter by replacing some of her long dialogues with brief descriptions. There were some repetitions in her speech but I didn't mind too much. She sometimes stammered in her speech but she naturally handled that by going on with the story as if nothing happened.
• What did you like about the speech?
I really loved her entire speech because I also had experiences abroad when I was young. She really seemed enthusiastic about her topic since she is talking about her own experience when she was in Canada. Her voice was at ease like telling her friends a story. Her visuals were good too. I couldn't help referring back to my childhood memories in America when she put up images of children books like "Clifford" and "Magic Tree House". I really loved them. Great speech!