Sunday, November 27, 2016

Jisu Kim/Ancient Roman Empire/ Wednesday 5-6

2 comments:

  1. Title : Ancient Roman Empire
    Evaluator : Won Hyeong Kim
    Date : 16.11.30

    • Topic Selection: _o_Facilitated vocal variety __Satisfactory __Could Improve
    • Volume: __Excellent _o_Satisfactory __Too loud or soft
    • Rate: _o_Excellent, varied __Satisfactory __Too fast or too slow
    • Pitch: __Varied conversational _o_Satisfactory __Monotonous, artificial
    • Quality: __Pleasant, friendly _o_Satisfactory __Harsh, monotonous
    • Pauses: __Appropriate, effective _o_Satisfactory __Could Improve
    • Expressiveness: _o_Conveyed emotion, meaning __Satisfactory __Could Improve
    • Vocal Variety: _o_Enhanced speech __Satisfactory __Could Improve
    • Organization: _o_Logical flow of ideas __Satisfactory __Should Improve
    • Word Usage: _o_Vivid, descriptive, accurate __Satisfactory __Could Improve
    • Body Language: __Natural, expressive _o_Satisfactory __Unnatural, distracting


    • What could the speaker have done differently to make the speech more effective?

    If he use some body languages, it will be better next time. His voice sound was little bit small.



    • What did you like about the speech?

    His topic was good. It is unique. And he used his PPT slides very well to let us know the meaning of his words.

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  2. Title : Ancient Roman Empire
    Evaluator : Do Hyun Lim
    Date : 16.12.02

    • Topic Selection: _o_Facilitated vocal variety __Satisfactory __Could Improve
    • Volume: __Excellent _o_Satisfactory __Too loud or soft
    • Rate: _o_Excellent, varied __Satisfactory __Too fast or too slow
    • Pitch: __Varied conversational _o_Satisfactory __Monotonous, artificial
    • Quality: _o_Pleasant, friendly __Satisfactory __Harsh, monotonous
    • Pauses: __Appropriate, effective _o_Satisfactory __Could Improve
    • Expressiveness: __Conveyed emotion, meaning _o_Satisfactory __Could Improve
    • Vocal Variety: _o_Enhanced speech __Satisfactory __Could Improve
    • Organization: _o_Logical flow of ideas __Satisfactory __Should Improve
    • Word Usage: __Vivid, descriptive, accurate _o_Satisfactory __Could Improve
    • Body Language: __Natural, expressive _o_Satisfactory __Unnatural, distracting


    • What could the speaker have done differently to make the speech more effective?

    The speaker could have spoken louder with more expressive languages.


    • What did you like about the speech?
    The history of the Roman Empire is vast and fascinating. The speech had a good topic selection with interesting descriptions of what happened along with appropriate visual contents.

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