• What could the speaker have done differently to make the speech more effective?
It would have been better if his speech was less monotonous. Also, putting more emotions to his speech would have helped him to have a improved presentation.
• What did you like about the speech?
I like the way he gave a speech in a calm way. It allowed the audience to concentrate without distraction. Also, his organization of speech was clear which made me understand easily about his topic. Throughout the whole presentation, it seemed that he practiced his speech very much.
Title: Fair Trade Evaluator: Matthew Sung Date: November 29th, 2016
•Topic Selection: _ _Facilitated vocal variety _ o _Satisfactory __Could Improve •Volume: _o_Excellent __Satisfactory __Too loud or soft •Rate: _o_Excellent, varied __Satisfactory __Too fast or too slow •Pitch: _ o _Varied conversational _ _Satisfactory __Monotonous, artificial •Quality: _o_Pleasant, friendly __Satisfactory __Harsh, monotonous •Pauses: _ _Appropriate, effective _ o _Satisfactory __Could Improve •Expressiveness: __ Conveyed emotion, meaning _o_Satisfactory __Could Improve •Vocal Variety: __Enhanced speech _o_Satisfactory __Could Improve •Organization: _o_Logical flow of ideas __Satisfactory __Should Improve •Word Usage: _o_Vivid, descriptive, accurate __Satisfactory __Could Improve •Body Language: _ _Natural, expressive _ o _Satisfactory __Unnatural, distracting
• What could the speaker have done differently to make the speech more effective?
It would have been easier for him to express vocal variety if he had become more emotional and thus showed that he sympathizes with people like Vietnamese or Ghanaians who were very likely to suffer in the absence of fair trade..
• What did you like about the speech?
Although it might seem that there is little change in volume, rate, or pitch, he was effective and efficient enough to deliver his message, concerning the type of presentation. I also liked that he came up with tangible and practical examples related to the topic, so that I could keep track of the contents of the presentation with ease.
•Topic Selection: _ _Facilitated vocal variety _ o _Satisfactory __Could Improve •Volume: _ _Excellent _ o _Satisfactory __Too loud or soft •Rate: _o_Excellent, varied __Satisfactory __Too fast or too slow •Pitch: _ _Varied conversational _ _Satisfactory _ o _Monotonous, artificial •Quality: _ _Pleasant, friendly _ o _Satisfactory __Harsh, monotonous •Pauses: _ o _Appropriate, effective _ _Satisfactory __Could Improve •Expressiveness: __ Conveyed emotion, meaning _o_Satisfactory __Could Improve •Vocal Variety: __Enhanced speech _ _Satisfactory _ o _Could Improve •Organization: _ _Logical flow of ideas _ o _Satisfactory __Should Improve •Word Usage: _o_Vivid, descriptive, accurate __Satisfactory __Could Improve •Body Language: _ _Natural, expressive _ _Satisfactory _ o _Unnatural, distracting
• What could the speaker have done differently to make the speech more effective?
I think that my voice was not variable enough to convey the emotion, and I should have tried harder to vary my pitch. Also, I seemed too stiff as I giving the speech.
• What did you like about the speech?
I think I selected the topic which contradicts what others think, but explained it persuasively with clear examples.
Evaluation Guide for
ReplyDeleteVocal Variety
Title: Fair Trade
Evaluator: Jee Woo Lim Date: November 28th, 2016
•Topic Selection: _o_Facilitated vocal variety __Satisfactory __Could Improve
•Volume: _o_Excellent __Satisfactory __Too loud or soft
•Rate: _o_Excellent, varied __Satisfactory __Too fast or too slow
•Pitch: __Varied conversational _o_Satisfactory __Monotonous, artificial
•Quality: _o_Pleasant, friendly __Satisfactory __Harsh, monotonous
•Pauses: _o_Appropriate, effective __Satisfactory __Could Improve
•Expressiveness: __ Conveyed emotion, meaning _o_Satisfactory __Could Improve
•Vocal Variety: __Enhanced speech _o_Satisfactory __Could Improve
•Organization: _o_Logical flow of ideas __Satisfactory __Should Improve
•Word Usage: _o_Vivid, descriptive, accurate __Satisfactory __Could Improve
•Body Language: _o_Natural, expressive __Satisfactory __Unnatural, distracting
• What could the speaker have done differently to make the speech more effective?
It would have been better if his speech was less monotonous. Also, putting more emotions to his speech would have helped him to have a improved presentation.
• What did you like about the speech?
I like the way he gave a speech in a calm way. It allowed the audience to concentrate without distraction. Also, his organization of speech was clear which made me understand easily about his topic. Throughout the whole presentation, it seemed that he practiced his speech very much.
Title: Fair Trade
ReplyDeleteEvaluator: Matthew Sung
Date: November 29th, 2016
•Topic Selection: _ _Facilitated vocal variety _ o _Satisfactory __Could Improve
•Volume: _o_Excellent __Satisfactory __Too loud or soft
•Rate: _o_Excellent, varied __Satisfactory __Too fast or too slow
•Pitch: _ o _Varied conversational _ _Satisfactory __Monotonous, artificial
•Quality: _o_Pleasant, friendly __Satisfactory __Harsh, monotonous
•Pauses: _ _Appropriate, effective _ o _Satisfactory __Could Improve
•Expressiveness: __ Conveyed emotion, meaning _o_Satisfactory __Could Improve
•Vocal Variety: __Enhanced speech _o_Satisfactory __Could Improve
•Organization: _o_Logical flow of ideas __Satisfactory __Should Improve
•Word Usage: _o_Vivid, descriptive, accurate __Satisfactory __Could Improve
•Body Language: _ _Natural, expressive _ o _Satisfactory __Unnatural, distracting
• What could the speaker have done differently to make the speech more effective?
It would have been easier for him to express vocal variety if he had become more emotional and thus showed that he sympathizes with people like Vietnamese or Ghanaians who were very likely to suffer in the absence of fair trade..
• What did you like about the speech?
Although it might seem that there is little change in volume, rate, or pitch, he was effective and efficient enough to deliver his message, concerning the type of presentation. I also liked that he came up with tangible and practical examples related to the topic, so that I could keep track of the contents of the presentation with ease.
Title: Fair Trade
ReplyDeleteEvaluator: Moses Choi (Self-evaluation)
Date: November 30th, 2016
•Topic Selection: _ _Facilitated vocal variety _ o _Satisfactory __Could Improve
•Volume: _ _Excellent _ o _Satisfactory __Too loud or soft
•Rate: _o_Excellent, varied __Satisfactory __Too fast or too slow
•Pitch: _ _Varied conversational _ _Satisfactory _ o _Monotonous, artificial
•Quality: _ _Pleasant, friendly _ o _Satisfactory __Harsh, monotonous
•Pauses: _ o _Appropriate, effective _ _Satisfactory __Could Improve
•Expressiveness: __ Conveyed emotion, meaning _o_Satisfactory __Could Improve
•Vocal Variety: __Enhanced speech _ _Satisfactory _ o _Could Improve
•Organization: _ _Logical flow of ideas _ o _Satisfactory __Should Improve
•Word Usage: _o_Vivid, descriptive, accurate __Satisfactory __Could Improve
•Body Language: _ _Natural, expressive _ _Satisfactory _ o _Unnatural, distracting
• What could the speaker have done differently to make the speech more effective?
I think that my voice was not variable enough to convey the emotion, and I should have tried harder to vary my pitch. Also, I seemed too stiff as I giving the speech.
• What did you like about the speech?
I think I selected the topic which contradicts what others think, but explained it persuasively with clear examples.