Title: Media teaching people how to date Evaluator: Lee Donghyang Date: November 26, 2016
The topic was interesting that there were TV programs that teaching how to date in Korea. She explained benefits and negative aspects on media teaching on dating. Volume, rate, pitch, pauses, and even expressions were perfect. In previous presentation, she also did well in giving stress when speaking. She moved a lot of her arm to point the Power point and it help audience to easily catch what she’s saying. The idea she wanted to say flowed natually and she chose many descriptive, accurate word in her presentation. She’s trying to warn not to rely on media and sns quizes and enjoy our rights on dating. • Topic Selection: _o_Facilitated vocal variety __Satisfactory __Could Improve • Volume: _o_Excellent __Satisfactory __Too loud or soft • Rate: _o_Excellent, varied __Satisfactory __Too fast or too slow • Pitch: _o_Varied conversational __Satisfactory __Monotonous, artificial • Quality: _o_Pleasant, friendly __Satisfactory __Harsh, monotonous • Pauses: _o_Appropriate, effective __Satisfactory __Could Improve • Expressiveness: _o_Conveyed emotion, meaning __Satisfactory __Could Improve • Vocal Variety: _o_Enhanced speech __Satisfactory __Could Improve • Organization: _o_Logical flow of ideas __Satisfactory __Should Improve • Word Usage: _o_Vivid, descriptive, accurate __Satisfactory __Could Improve • Body Language: _o_Natural, expressive __Satisfactory __Unnatural, distracting
• What could the speaker have done differently to make the speech more effective?
Nothing can be better than this !! Great job!
• What did you like about the speech?
I love her pronunciation and accent! Also, I like the conclusion part where she said to enjoy our right to love and be loved as we need. It gives audience courage to love passionately.
Title: Media Teaching People How to Date Evaluator: Dawon Park Date: November 27, 2016
The speaker used appropriate volume of voice and proper pauses. The pitch and rate was also good, in which they helped convey her speech efficiently. She also organized the speech very well, by telling her own experience, describing what she will talk about overall, and then moving on to the specific information. -Topic Selection:_o_Facilitated vocal variety __Satisfactory__Could Improve -Volume: _o_Excellent __Satisfactory __Too loud or soft -Rate:_o_Excellent, varied __Satisfactory __Too fast or too slow -Pitch: _o_Varied conversational __Satisfactory __Monotonous, artificial -Quality: _0_Pleasant, friendly __Satisfactory __Harsh, monotonous -Pauses: _0_Appropriate, effective __Satisfactory __Could Improve -Expressiveness: _0_Conveyed emotion, meaning __Satisfactory __Could Improve -Vocal Variety: _0_Enhanced speech __Satisfactory __Could Improve -Organization: _0_Logical flow of ideas __Satisfactory __Should Improve -Word Usage: _0_Vivid, descriptive, accurate __Satisfactory __Could Improve -Body Language: _0_Natural, expressive __Satisfactory __Unnatural, distracting
-What could the speaker have done differently to make the speech more effective? Towards the end, she had a tendency to look at her notes often, it would have been better if she tried to recollect it even if it takes some time. Also it would have been more effective if she explained the visuals more specificly for instance the part of “Love Alone”.
-What did you like about the speech? I really liked the part when she said “Was your heart pounding at the moment?” in the beginning, her expressions and voice were very balanced. I also liked how she maintained her voice and tone throughout the whole speech. It was also well organized and the topic was interesting.
Title: Media teaching people how to date Evaluator: Hyeji Kim Date: November 28, 2016 After watching her speech, I felt she prepared this very hardly. There were lots of questions and examples. I think she tried to catch audience’s attention by asking 2 questions in the beginning and it succeeded! With her personal experience, she could get more interest. Also, in her speech, there are programs I know. It makes me feel surprised and more concentrate on her speech. She woke the audience up when they lost their concentration with various expressions.
• Topic Selection: _o_Facilitated vocal variety __Satisfactory __Could Improve • Volume: _o_Excellent __Satisfactory __Too loud or soft • Rate: __Excellent, varied _ o _Satisfactory __Too fast or too slow • Pitch: _o_Varied conversational __Satisfactory __Monotonous, artificial • Quality: _o_Pleasant, friendly __Satisfactory __Harsh, monotonous • Pauses: _o_Appropriate, effective __Satisfactory __Could Improve • Expressiveness: _o_Conveyed emotion, meaning __Satisfactory __Could Improve • Vocal Variety: _o_Enhanced speech __Satisfactory __Could Improve • Organization: _o_Logical flow of ideas __Satisfactory __Should Improve • Word Usage: _o_Vivid, descriptive, accurate __Satisfactory __Could Improve • Body Language: _o_Natural, expressive __Satisfactory __Unnatural, distracting
• What could the speaker have done differently to make the speech more effective? I think it would be great if she was relaxed and spoke more slowly. Except that, her speech is really good!
• What did you like about the speech? I like her organization. Her topic is absolutely related and helpful to young people like me. Young people always consider their date with boyfriend or girlfriend. So actually lots of people look for advices through TV program. I think she completely recognizes this situation. Her topic totally fits for her latent audience. In the body, she explained causes and negative effects of getting advices in media. It makes her speech more persuasive. Further, conclusion is great. By ending with this conclusion, she encourages people to make their own date style and not to be afraid. I love that!
Title: Media teaching people how to date Evaluator: Juyeon Lee Date: November 28, 2016
The topic that the speaker chose for this presentaion was facilitated vocal variety. Her voice volume, rate, and pitch was beyond excellent and balanced. She used some pauses and vocal variety effectively and it makes the audience listen to her very carefully. Also, she used many live words to make audiences easily understand. Hand gusture are great as well.
• Topic Selection: _o_Facilitated vocal variety __Satisfactory __Could Improve • Volume: _o_Excellent __Satisfactory __Too loud or soft • Rate: _o_Excellent, varied __Satisfactory __Too fast or too slow • Pitch: _o_Varied conversational __Satisfactory __Monotonous, artificial • Quality: _o_Pleasant, friendly __Satisfactory __Harsh, monotonous • Pauses: __Appropriate, effective _o_Satisfactory __Could Improve • Expressiveness: _o_Conveyed emotion, meaning __Satisfactory __Could Improve • Vocal Variety: _o_Enhanced speech __Satisfactory __Could Improve • Organization: _o_Logical flow of ideas __Satisfactory __Should Improve • Word Usage: _o_Vivid, descriptive, accurate __Satisfactory __Could Improve • Body Language: _o_Natural, expressive __Satisfactory __Unnatural, distracting
• What could the speaker have done differently to make the speech more effective? Everything was perfect! I think this is the BEST speech which have done during this whole semester. There was a short pause because she forgot some parts of the speech but she wasn't that embarrassed and continued what she was speaking as there's nothing happened. I appreciate it. It would be helpful next time if you highlight some words that you often forget and look at it when you have a difficulty on presenting.
• What did you like about the speech? I really like the way she speaks as well as the topic itself. Her voice is so clear and nice. I've never thought that the media teaches people how to date but after listening to her speech, I think we have slowly been exposed by them. It was such a fresh and interesting topic about the media. Also, I like the conclusion part. "By respecting each other, having enough conversation and loving passionate, you can get through this problem..."
Title: Media teaching people how to date
ReplyDeleteEvaluator: Lee Donghyang
Date: November 26, 2016
The topic was interesting that there were TV programs that teaching how to date in Korea. She explained benefits and negative aspects on media teaching on dating. Volume, rate, pitch, pauses, and even expressions were perfect. In previous presentation, she also did well in giving stress when speaking. She moved a lot of her arm to point the Power point and it help audience to easily catch what she’s saying. The idea she wanted to say flowed natually and she chose many descriptive, accurate word in her presentation. She’s trying to warn not to rely on media and sns quizes and enjoy our rights on dating.
• Topic Selection: _o_Facilitated vocal variety __Satisfactory __Could Improve
• Volume: _o_Excellent __Satisfactory __Too loud or soft
• Rate: _o_Excellent, varied __Satisfactory __Too fast or too slow
• Pitch: _o_Varied conversational __Satisfactory __Monotonous, artificial
• Quality: _o_Pleasant, friendly __Satisfactory __Harsh, monotonous
• Pauses: _o_Appropriate, effective __Satisfactory __Could Improve
• Expressiveness: _o_Conveyed emotion, meaning __Satisfactory __Could Improve
• Vocal Variety: _o_Enhanced speech __Satisfactory __Could Improve
• Organization: _o_Logical flow of ideas __Satisfactory __Should Improve
• Word Usage: _o_Vivid, descriptive, accurate __Satisfactory __Could Improve
• Body Language: _o_Natural, expressive __Satisfactory __Unnatural, distracting
• What could the speaker have done differently to make the speech more effective?
Nothing can be better than this !! Great job!
• What did you like about the speech?
I love her pronunciation and accent! Also, I like the conclusion part where she said to enjoy our right to love and be loved as we need. It gives audience courage to love passionately.
Title: Media Teaching People How to Date
ReplyDeleteEvaluator: Dawon Park
Date: November 27, 2016
The speaker used appropriate volume of voice and proper pauses. The pitch and rate was also good, in which they helped convey her speech efficiently. She also organized the speech very well, by telling her own experience, describing what she will talk about overall, and then moving on to the specific information.
-Topic Selection:_o_Facilitated vocal variety __Satisfactory__Could Improve
-Volume: _o_Excellent __Satisfactory __Too loud or soft
-Rate:_o_Excellent, varied __Satisfactory __Too fast or too slow
-Pitch: _o_Varied conversational __Satisfactory __Monotonous, artificial
-Quality: _0_Pleasant, friendly __Satisfactory __Harsh, monotonous
-Pauses: _0_Appropriate, effective __Satisfactory __Could Improve
-Expressiveness: _0_Conveyed emotion, meaning __Satisfactory __Could Improve
-Vocal Variety: _0_Enhanced speech __Satisfactory __Could Improve
-Organization: _0_Logical flow of ideas __Satisfactory __Should Improve
-Word Usage: _0_Vivid, descriptive, accurate __Satisfactory __Could Improve
-Body Language: _0_Natural, expressive __Satisfactory __Unnatural, distracting
-What could the speaker have done differently to make the speech more effective?
Towards the end, she had a tendency to look at her notes often, it would have been better if she tried to recollect it even if it takes some time. Also it would have been more effective if she explained the visuals more specificly for instance the part of “Love Alone”.
-What did you like about the speech?
I really liked the part when she said “Was your heart pounding at the moment?” in the beginning, her expressions and voice were very balanced. I also liked how she maintained her voice and tone throughout the whole speech. It was also well organized and the topic was interesting.
Title: Media teaching people how to date
ReplyDeleteEvaluator: Hyeji Kim
Date: November 28, 2016
After watching her speech, I felt she prepared this very hardly. There were lots of questions and examples. I think she tried to catch audience’s attention by asking 2 questions in the beginning and it succeeded! With her personal experience, she could get more interest. Also, in her speech, there are programs I know. It makes me feel surprised and more concentrate on her speech. She woke the audience up when they lost their concentration with various expressions.
• Topic Selection: _o_Facilitated vocal variety __Satisfactory __Could Improve
• Volume: _o_Excellent __Satisfactory __Too loud or soft
• Rate: __Excellent, varied _ o _Satisfactory __Too fast or too slow
• Pitch: _o_Varied conversational __Satisfactory __Monotonous, artificial
• Quality: _o_Pleasant, friendly __Satisfactory __Harsh, monotonous
• Pauses: _o_Appropriate, effective __Satisfactory __Could Improve
• Expressiveness: _o_Conveyed emotion, meaning __Satisfactory __Could Improve
• Vocal Variety: _o_Enhanced speech __Satisfactory __Could Improve
• Organization: _o_Logical flow of ideas __Satisfactory __Should Improve
• Word Usage: _o_Vivid, descriptive, accurate __Satisfactory __Could Improve
• Body Language: _o_Natural, expressive __Satisfactory __Unnatural, distracting
• What could the speaker have done differently to make the speech more effective?
I think it would be great if she was relaxed and spoke more slowly. Except that, her speech is really good!
• What did you like about the speech?
I like her organization. Her topic is absolutely related and helpful to young people like me. Young people always consider their date with boyfriend or girlfriend. So actually lots of people look for advices through TV program. I think she completely recognizes this situation. Her topic totally fits for her latent audience. In the body, she explained causes and negative effects of getting advices in media. It makes her speech more persuasive. Further, conclusion is great. By ending with this conclusion, she encourages people to make their own date style and not to be afraid. I love that!
Title: Media teaching people how to date
ReplyDeleteEvaluator: Juyeon Lee
Date: November 28, 2016
The topic that the speaker chose for this presentaion was facilitated vocal variety. Her voice volume, rate, and pitch was beyond excellent and balanced. She used some pauses and vocal variety effectively and it makes the audience listen to her very carefully. Also, she used many live words to make audiences easily understand. Hand gusture are great as well.
• Topic Selection: _o_Facilitated vocal variety __Satisfactory __Could Improve
• Volume: _o_Excellent __Satisfactory __Too loud or soft
• Rate: _o_Excellent, varied __Satisfactory __Too fast or too slow
• Pitch: _o_Varied conversational __Satisfactory __Monotonous, artificial
• Quality: _o_Pleasant, friendly __Satisfactory __Harsh, monotonous
• Pauses: __Appropriate, effective _o_Satisfactory __Could Improve
• Expressiveness: _o_Conveyed emotion, meaning __Satisfactory __Could Improve
• Vocal Variety: _o_Enhanced speech __Satisfactory __Could Improve
• Organization: _o_Logical flow of ideas __Satisfactory __Should Improve
• Word Usage: _o_Vivid, descriptive, accurate __Satisfactory __Could Improve
• Body Language: _o_Natural, expressive __Satisfactory __Unnatural, distracting
• What could the speaker have done differently to make the speech more effective?
Everything was perfect! I think this is the BEST speech which have done during this whole semester. There was a short pause because she forgot some parts of the speech but she wasn't that embarrassed and continued what she was speaking as there's nothing happened. I appreciate it. It would be helpful next time if you highlight some words that you often forget and look at it when you have a difficulty on presenting.
• What did you like about the speech?
I really like the way she speaks as well as the topic itself. Her voice is so clear and nice. I've never thought that the media teaches people how to date but after listening to her speech, I think we have slowly been exposed by them. It was such a fresh and interesting topic about the media. Also, I like the conclusion part. "By respecting each other, having enough conversation and loving passionate, you can get through this problem..."