Monday, November 28, 2016

Seungyeon Lee/Vocal variety speech/ pesenting in English/ problems of korean soap operas/ wed 56

1 comment:

  1. Title: Problems of Korean soap operas
    Evaluator: Hyeji Kim
    Date: November 28, 2016
    Her subject is really good. Whenever I watched Korean dramas, I feel the same thing. Also, she categorized the causes and found the way to solve this situation. I like the way that she logically explained her subject.

    • Topic Selection: _o_Facilitated vocal variety __Satisfactory __Could Improve
    • Volume: _o_Excellent __Satisfactory __Too loud or soft
    • Rate: _o_Excellent, varied __Satisfactory __Too fast or too slow
    • Pitch: _o_Varied conversational __Satisfactory __Monotonous, artificial
    • Quality: _o_Pleasant, friendly __Satisfactory __Harsh, monotonous
    • Pauses: _o_Appropriate, effective __Satisfactory __Could Improve
    • Expressiveness: __Conveyed emotion, meaning _ o _Satisfactory __Could Improve
    • Vocal Variety: _o_Enhanced speech __Satisfactory __Could Improve
    • Organization: _o_Logical flow of ideas __Satisfactory __Should Improve
    • Word Usage: _o_Vivid, descriptive, accurate __Satisfactory __Could Improve
    • Body Language: __Natural, expressive _o_Satisfactory __Unnatural, distracting

    • What could the speaker have done differently to make the speech more effective?
    It would be great if she used more body language and facial expression. If she did, the topic would be more specific to the audience.

    • What did you like about the speech?
    I like her material for speech. With many examples that I’m used to, I could focus more deeply. I think others would feel the same. Also, through these examples, she could deliver exactly what she wanted to say.

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