Title: Violence in media Evaluator: Lee Donghyang Date: November 26, 2016
The topic that the speaker chose for this presentaion was facilitated vocal variety. Her volume, rate, and pitch was excellent and balanced. She used some pauses and vocal variety effectively that makes audience listen to what she’s trying to warn. Her presentation was well organized. Also, she used many vivid words to make audiences easily understand. Hand gusture are great but it was a little awkward while presenting. • Topic Selection: _o_Facilitated vocal variety __Satisfactory __Could Improve • Volume: _o_Excellent __Satisfactory __Too loud or soft • Rate: _o_Excellent, varied __Satisfactory __Too fast or too slow • Pitch: _o_Varied conversational __Satisfactory __Monotonous, artificial • Quality: _o_Pleasant, friendly __Satisfactory __Harsh, monotonous • Pauses: __Appropriate, effective _o_Satisfactory __Could Improve • Expressiveness: __Conveyed emotion, meaning _o_Satisfactory __Could Improve • Vocal Variety: _o_Enhanced speech __Satisfactory __Could Improve • Organization: _o_Logical flow of ideas __Satisfactory __Should Improve • Word Usage: _o_Vivid, descriptive, accurate __Satisfactory __Could Improve • Body Language: _o_Natural, expressive __Satisfactory __Unnatural, distracting
• What could the speaker have done differently to make the speech more effective?
It would have been better if she gave more pauses in between the point (paragraph) and should slow down to make the speech more effective speech. The rest are great.
• What did you like about the speech?
The topic was about what we use in everyday life which was quite easy to understand. Also, I like the conclusion part because she used quote to sum up what she had said.
• What could the speaker have done differently to make the speech more effective?
I think she would've been better if she had used more proper facial expressions. Even though her body gestures improved compared to last get to the point presentation, I think her facial expressions were the same all the time during her speech. Also, I think it would've been better if she had exaggerated a little bit when she was giving stresses to some words.
• What did you like about the speech?
I really liked the speaker's speed. The speed really helped me understand her presentation and message well. The volume was also loud enough and she paused effectively. I think these are her strong points.
Title: Violence in media
ReplyDeleteEvaluator: Lee Donghyang
Date: November 26, 2016
The topic that the speaker chose for this presentaion was facilitated vocal variety. Her volume, rate, and pitch was excellent and balanced. She used some pauses and vocal variety effectively that makes audience listen to what she’s trying to warn. Her presentation was well organized. Also, she used many vivid words to make audiences easily understand. Hand gusture are great but it was a little awkward while presenting.
• Topic Selection: _o_Facilitated vocal variety __Satisfactory __Could Improve
• Volume: _o_Excellent __Satisfactory __Too loud or soft
• Rate: _o_Excellent, varied __Satisfactory __Too fast or too slow
• Pitch: _o_Varied conversational __Satisfactory __Monotonous, artificial
• Quality: _o_Pleasant, friendly __Satisfactory __Harsh, monotonous
• Pauses: __Appropriate, effective _o_Satisfactory __Could Improve
• Expressiveness: __Conveyed emotion, meaning _o_Satisfactory __Could Improve
• Vocal Variety: _o_Enhanced speech __Satisfactory __Could Improve
• Organization: _o_Logical flow of ideas __Satisfactory __Should Improve
• Word Usage: _o_Vivid, descriptive, accurate __Satisfactory __Could Improve
• Body Language: _o_Natural, expressive __Satisfactory __Unnatural, distracting
• What could the speaker have done differently to make the speech more effective?
It would have been better if she gave more pauses in between the point (paragraph) and should slow down to make the speech more effective speech. The rest are great.
• What did you like about the speech?
The topic was about what we use in everyday life which was quite easy to understand. Also, I like the conclusion part because she used quote to sum up what she had said.
Evaluation Guide for
ReplyDeleteVocal Variety
Title: Violence in Media
Evaluator: Jeonghee Lee Date: November, 27th 2016
•Topic Selection: __Facilitated vocal variety _o_Satisfactory __Could Improve
•Volume: _o_Excellent __Satisfactory __Too loud or soft
•Rate: _o_Excellent, varied __Satisfactory __Too fast or too slow
•Pitch: _o_Varied conversational __Satisfactory __Monotonous, artificial
•Quality: __Pleasant, friendly _o_Satisfactory __Harsh, monotonous
•Pauses: _o_Appropriate, effective __Satisfactory __Could Improve
•Expressiveness: __Conveyed emotion, meaning _o_Satisfactory __Could Improve
•Vocal Variety: __Enhanced speech _o_Satisfactory __Could Improve
•Organization: _o_Logical flow of ideas __Satisfactory __Should Improve
•Word Usage: _o_Vivid, descriptive, accurate __Satisfactory __Could Improve
•Body Language: __Natural, expressive _o_Satisfactory __Unnatural, distracting
• What could the speaker have done differently to make the speech more effective?
I think she would've been better if she had used more proper facial expressions. Even though her body gestures improved compared to last get to the point presentation, I think her facial expressions were the same all the time during her speech. Also, I think it would've been better if she had exaggerated a little bit when she was giving stresses to some words.
• What did you like about the speech?
I really liked the speaker's speed. The speed really helped me understand her presentation and message well. The volume was also loud enough and she paused effectively. I think these are her strong points.