Title: Why Trump Wond Evaluator: Kim Do Yeon Date: November 28, 2016
The topic that I chose for this presentaion was facilitated vocal variety. My volume was alright but rate, and pitch was a bit off. I used some pause in the beginning but couldn't use them in the end because of time limitation. I think my presentation slide was very visible since it had big images and concise words. I tried to use relatively easy vocabulary since the topic might sound boring.And I didn't want them to doze off during the speech. I used a lot of hand gesture but most of the time, it wasn't appropriate. • Topic Selection: _o_Facilitated vocal variety __Satisfactory __Could Improve • Volume: _o_Excellent __Satisfactory __Too loud or soft • Rate: __Excellent, varied _0_Satisfactory __Too fast or too slow • Pitch: _o_Varied conversational __Satisfactory __Monotonous, artificial • Quality: _o_Pleasant, friendly __Satisfactory __Harsh, monotonous • Pauses: __Appropriate, effective _o_Satisfactory __Could Improve • Expressiveness: _0_Conveyed emotion, meaning __Satisfactory __Could Improve • Vocal Variety: _o_Enhanced speech __Satisfactory __Could Improve • Organization: _o_Logical flow of ideas __Satisfactory __Should Improve • Word Usage: _o_Vivid, descriptive, accurate __Satisfactory __Could Improve • Body Language: __Natural, expressive _0_Satisfactory __Unnatural, distracting
• What could the speaker have done differently to make the speech more effective?
It would have been better if I had perfectly memorized the script. I was also a bit excited about the topic so I went off-pace, which caused me to speak a bit fast and mispronounce some words.
• What did you like about the speech?
The topic was a very debatable topic. Many were upset about trump's victory and I believe there are many other reasons people think why he had won the election.
Title : Why Trump Won Evaluator : Do Hyun Lim Date : 16.12.02
• Topic Selection: __Facilitated vocal variety _o_Satisfactory __Could Improve • Volume: _o_Excellent __Satisfactory __Too loud or soft • Rate: _o_Excellent, varied __Satisfactory __Too fast or too slow • Pitch: _o_Varied conversational __Satisfactory __Monotonous, artificial • Quality: _o_Pleasant, friendly __Satisfactory __Harsh, monotonous • Pauses: __Appropriate, effective _o_Satisfactory __Could Improve • Expressiveness: _o_Conveyed emotion, meaning __Satisfactory __Could Improve • Vocal Variety: _o_Enhanced speech __Satisfactory __Could Improve • Organization: _o_Logical flow of ideas __Satisfactory __Should Improve • Word Usage: __Vivid, descriptive, accurate _o_Satisfactory __Could Improve • Body Language: _o_Natural, expressive __Satisfactory __Unnatural, distracting
• What could the speaker have done differently to make the speech more effective?
The speech could have been shorter and speaking without looking at the script would have been more natural.
• What did you like about the speech? It explained well about the voting system of USA, which many people are not familiar with. Also, good organization of contents where the order of topics made it easier to understand.
Title: Why Trump Wond
ReplyDeleteEvaluator: Kim Do Yeon
Date: November 28, 2016
The topic that I chose for this presentaion was facilitated vocal variety. My volume was alright but rate, and pitch was a bit off. I used some pause in the beginning but couldn't use them in the end because of time limitation. I think my presentation slide was very visible since it had big images and concise words. I tried to use relatively easy vocabulary since the topic might sound boring.And I didn't want them to doze off during the speech. I used a lot of hand gesture but most of the time, it wasn't appropriate.
• Topic Selection: _o_Facilitated vocal variety __Satisfactory __Could Improve
• Volume: _o_Excellent __Satisfactory __Too loud or soft
• Rate: __Excellent, varied _0_Satisfactory __Too fast or too slow
• Pitch: _o_Varied conversational __Satisfactory __Monotonous, artificial
• Quality: _o_Pleasant, friendly __Satisfactory __Harsh, monotonous
• Pauses: __Appropriate, effective _o_Satisfactory __Could Improve
• Expressiveness: _0_Conveyed emotion, meaning __Satisfactory __Could Improve
• Vocal Variety: _o_Enhanced speech __Satisfactory __Could Improve
• Organization: _o_Logical flow of ideas __Satisfactory __Should Improve
• Word Usage: _o_Vivid, descriptive, accurate __Satisfactory __Could Improve
• Body Language: __Natural, expressive _0_Satisfactory __Unnatural, distracting
• What could the speaker have done differently to make the speech more effective?
It would have been better if I had perfectly memorized the script. I was also a bit excited about the topic so I went off-pace, which caused me to speak a bit fast and mispronounce some words.
• What did you like about the speech?
The topic was a very debatable topic. Many were upset about trump's victory and I believe there are many other reasons people think why he had won the election.
Title : Why Trump Wond
ReplyDeleteEvaluator : Won Hyeong Kim
Date : 16.11.30
• Topic Selection: _o_Facilitated vocal variety __Satisfactory __Could Improve
• Volume: _o_Excellent __Satisfactory __Too loud or soft
• Rate: _o_Excellent, varied __Satisfactory __Too fast or too slow
• Pitch: __Varied conversational _o_Satisfactory __Monotonous, artificial
• Quality: __Pleasant, friendly _o_Satisfactory __Harsh, monotonous
• Pauses: __Appropriate, effective _o_Satisfactory __Could Improve
• Expressiveness: __Conveyed emotion, meaning _o_Satisfactory __Could Improve
• Vocal Variety: _o_Enhanced speech __Satisfactory __Could Improve
• Organization: _o_Logical flow of ideas __Satisfactory __Should Improve
• Word Usage: _o_Vivid, descriptive, accurate __Satisfactory __Could Improve
• Body Language: __Natural, expressive _o_Satisfactory __Unnatural, distracting
• What could the speaker have done differently to make the speech more effective?
I could not understand some words that he said. It will be good If he control the speed of his presentation next time.
• What did you like about the speech?
As he said, the topic is very debatable. And His speech was very fluent and some body languages were also good.
Title : Why Trump Won
ReplyDeleteEvaluator : Do Hyun Lim
Date : 16.12.02
• Topic Selection: __Facilitated vocal variety _o_Satisfactory __Could Improve
• Volume: _o_Excellent __Satisfactory __Too loud or soft
• Rate: _o_Excellent, varied __Satisfactory __Too fast or too slow
• Pitch: _o_Varied conversational __Satisfactory __Monotonous, artificial
• Quality: _o_Pleasant, friendly __Satisfactory __Harsh, monotonous
• Pauses: __Appropriate, effective _o_Satisfactory __Could Improve
• Expressiveness: _o_Conveyed emotion, meaning __Satisfactory __Could Improve
• Vocal Variety: _o_Enhanced speech __Satisfactory __Could Improve
• Organization: _o_Logical flow of ideas __Satisfactory __Should Improve
• Word Usage: __Vivid, descriptive, accurate _o_Satisfactory __Could Improve
• Body Language: _o_Natural, expressive __Satisfactory __Unnatural, distracting
• What could the speaker have done differently to make the speech more effective?
The speech could have been shorter and speaking without looking at the script would have been more natural.
• What did you like about the speech?
It explained well about the voting system of USA, which many people are not familiar with. Also, good organization of contents where the order of topics made it easier to understand.