• What could the speaker have done differently to make the speech more effective?
I think my speech would sound better if I put some pauses when I'm making a transition to my next point.
• What did you like about the speech?
I tried my best to make some hand gestures that could relate to my points. Also, I tried making eye contact with the audience more this time. I think my organization of speech was pretty clear with an introduction, three main points and the conclusion. As for the vocal variety, I tried my best to stress words for emphasis and have some intonation variety as I spoke.
• What could the speaker have done differently to make the speech more effective?
I think that the speech in general was good, but I feel that sometimes she felt nervous. But, it can be improve.
• What did you like about the speech?
When I saw it in the first time, I was scared because of the images she used. But, I think it in the positive way because it helped me to focuse more about her presentation and the topic about animals are always interesting because of my personal preferences. So, the topic selection was really good and I'm really wondering about skip my next zoo visit.
Evaluation Guide for
ReplyDeleteVocal Variety
Title: Why you should skip your next zoo visit
Evaluator: Kyeong Ju Seo (Self-Evaluation) Date: November 28th, 2016
•Topic Selection: _o_Facilitated vocal variety __Satisfactory __Could Improve
•Volume: _o_Excellent __Satisfactory __Too loud or soft
•Rate: _o_Excellent, varied __Satisfactory __Too fast or too slow
•Pitch: _o_Varied conversational __Satisfactory __Monotonous, artificial
•Quality: __Pleasant, friendly _o_Satisfactory __Harsh, monotonous
•Pauses: __Appropriate, effective _o_Satisfactory __Could Improve
•Expressiveness: _o_Conveyed emotion, meaning __Satisfactory __Could Improve
•Vocal Variety: _o_Enhanced speech __Satisfactory __Could Improve
•Organization: _o_Logical flow of ideas __Satisfactory __Should Improve
•Word Usage: _o_Vivid, descriptive, accurate __Satisfactory __Could Improve
•Body Language: _o_Natural, expressive __Satisfactory __Unnatural, distracting
• What could the speaker have done differently to make the speech more effective?
I think my speech would sound better if I put some pauses when I'm making a transition to my next point.
• What did you like about the speech?
I tried my best to make some hand gestures that could relate to my points. Also, I tried making eye contact with the audience more this time. I think my organization of speech was pretty clear with an introduction, three main points and the conclusion. As for the vocal variety, I tried my best to stress words for emphasis and have some intonation variety as I spoke.
Evaluation Guide for
ReplyDeleteVocal Variety
Title: Why you should skip your next zoo visit
Evaluator: Sharon Lee (self-evaluation)
•Topic Selection: _o_Facilitated vocal variety __Satisfactory __Could Improve
•Volume: __Excellent _o_Satisfactory __Too loud or soft
•Rate: __Excellent, varied _o_Satisfactory __Too fast or too slow
•Pitch: _o_Varied conversational __Satisfactory __Monotonous, artificial
•Quality: __Pleasant, friendly _o_Satisfactory __Harsh, monotonous
•Pauses: __Appropriate, effective _o_Satisfactory __Could Improve
•Expressiveness: _o_Conveyed emotion, meaning __Satisfactory __Could Improve
•Vocal Variety: _o_Enhanced speech __Satisfactory __Could Improve
•Organization: _o_Logical flow of ideas __Satisfactory __Should Improve
•Word Usage: _o_Vivid, descriptive, accurate __Satisfactory __Could Improve
•Body Language: _o_Natural, expressive __Satisfactory __Unnatural, distracting
• What could the speaker have done differently to make the speech more effective?
I think that the speech in general was good, but I feel that sometimes she felt nervous. But, it can be improve.
• What did you like about the speech?
When I saw it in the first time, I was scared because of the images she used. But, I think it in the positive way because it helped me to focuse more about her presentation and the topic about animals are always interesting because of my personal preferences. So, the topic selection was really good and I'm really wondering about skip my next zoo visit.