The general purpose of speech is to inform cause, effects and solutions of low fertility rate.
2.The specific purpose of the speech was clear.-1
After presentaion, audience can think about the seriousness about the rate and they will activate some thoughts in daily life.
3.The speech organization supported the speech’s specific purpose.-1
Speech was well organized with opening, body and conclusion. I started with the statistics stated by nation. This will alert the audience about seriousness.
4.The main points and supporting material contributed to the speech’s specific purpose. -2
I did not use chart but I delivered points in clear way with showing them texts.
5.The beginning, body, and conclusion reinforced the specific purpose.-1
I started his speech with general facts and other specific details. I explained seriousness and cause of this problem. Then I said effects are correlated with causes. Finally I suggested some solutions to solve this problem.
6.The speaker achieved the specific purpose.-1
I explained the importance of why we should care about this. Also, I suggested some solutions to recover it. We may consider it in our daily life.
7.The speaker appeared confident and sincere, with minimal nervousness. -3
I admit that I shaked my arm too often. I swear I will improve my attitude.
8.The speaker did not rely on notes throughout the speech.-2
I sometimes looked at script but I did not rely on it.
9.What could the speaker have done differently to make the speech more effective?
Maybe I could use some funny photos but the topic is not related.
10.What did you like about the presentation?
In the video, my volume of voice was enough to hear rather it was quite loud. The length of the speech was proper although the contents were quite complex. Next time I may use some photos when the topic is adequate.
Speaking Feedback
ReplyDeleteDate: October 18th, 2016
Speaker: Self feedback
Evaluator: Young Ho Chun
Title: Low fertility
1.The general purpose of the speech was clear.-1
The general purpose of speech is to inform cause, effects and solutions of low fertility rate.
2.The specific purpose of the speech was clear.-1
After presentaion, audience can think about the seriousness about the rate and they will activate some thoughts in daily life.
3.The speech organization supported the speech’s specific purpose.-1
Speech was well organized with opening, body and conclusion. I started with the statistics stated by nation. This will alert the audience about seriousness.
4.The main points and supporting material contributed to the speech’s specific purpose. -2
I did not use chart but I delivered points in clear way with showing them texts.
5.The beginning, body, and conclusion reinforced the specific purpose.-1
I started his speech with general facts and other specific details. I explained seriousness and cause of this problem. Then I said effects are correlated with causes. Finally I suggested some solutions to solve this problem.
6.The speaker achieved the specific purpose.-1
I explained the importance of why we should care about this. Also, I suggested some solutions to recover it. We may consider it in our daily life.
7.The speaker appeared confident and sincere, with minimal nervousness. -3
I admit that I shaked my arm too often. I swear I will improve my attitude.
8.The speaker did not rely on notes throughout the speech.-2
I sometimes looked at script but I did not rely on it.
9.What could the speaker have done differently to make the speech more effective?
Maybe I could use some funny photos but the topic is not related.
10.What did you like about the presentation?
In the video, my volume of voice was enough to hear rather it was quite loud. The length of the speech was proper although the contents were quite complex. Next time I may use some photos when the topic is adequate.