Speaking Feedback Date: October 16th, 2016 Speaker: Choongsil Kim Evaluator: Jiyoung Lee Title: How to use social networing wisely.
1.The general purpose of the speech was clear.1 The general purpose of her speech is to infrom the audience. she used the research results, so it make it more reliable.
2.The specific purpose of the speech was clear.1 her specific purpose was "to inform some ways to use social networking wisely." she mentioned 4 ways, and it was well supported with some reasons.
3.The speech organization supported the speech’s specific purpose.2 Her speech was well organized with opening, body and conclusion.
4.The main points and supporting material contributed to the speech’s specific purpose.2 she mentioned 4 problems and for the each problem, and she suggested solutions to slove those. and she also used many researches to inform us.
5.The beginning, body, and conclusion reinforced the specific purpose.2 At the beginning, She asked a question to the audience. there were no one who didn't have the facebook account. it makes me concentrate on her presentation. In the body part, she said 4 problems and solutions using the sketchbook. it makes me more focus on it. for the conclusion, finally she gave some advices for using SNS wisely.
6.The speaker achieved the specific purpose.2 at least for me, her information was quite useful
7.The speaker appeared confident and sincere, with minimal nervousness.1 she didn't nervous at all. her voice was full of confidence. and loud enough to hear
8.The speaker did not rely on notes throughout the speech.2 she didn't bring the script. but only rely on it when she quote the expert's saying. I understood1 cause it is hard to memorize all.. but it doesn't bother me concentrating!
9.What could the speaker have done differently to make the speech more effective? if she use some chart or pictures, it would be better.
10.What did you like about the presentation? I was personally very impressed by her presentation. She prepared it almost perfectly..!! and seems very confident. also contents was useful.
The general purpose of her speech is to infrom the audience about the ways to use social networking wisely. It was written on the board during the presentation, which helped me to know the purpose of the speech.
2.The specific purpose of the speech was clear.-2
After her presentaion, I could realize what problems can be occurred of using SNS and wise ways to settle those problems. She explained those things with examples.
3.The speech organization supported the speech’s specific purpose.-1
Her speech was well organized with opening, body and conclusion. She used a skethchbook during presenting the body part. It made the audience focus on the letter on the sketchbook. Then she put it down before the concusion to gather the audience's attention back to her.
4.The main points and supporting material contributed to the speech’s specific purpose.-2
There were 4 questions which she asked to the audiences. Each questions had problems and she explained those problems with examples. Then she suggested certain solutions to slove those. All the questions and solutions were related to the purpose of the presentaion.
5.The beginning, body, and conclusion reinforced the specific purpose.-2
At the beginning, She asks a question to the audience. "Is there anyone who doesn't have a Facebook account?." Then she says "You guys are more than ready ro listen to my talk." It makes me to get curious about what she is going to say. In the body part, she asks us 4 questions that we have to ask ourselves. At the conclusion, she asks if we can answer those questions that she asked prefviously. Then she gives some advices and recommendations on using SNS widely.
6.The speaker achieved the specific purpose.-2
She had her presentaiom by using detailed examples. She also cited about the expert's saying to help the understanding.
7.The speaker appeared confident and sincere, with minimal nervousness. -3
Her voice was very calm and audible. Also she was very confident and had many eye contacts with the audience.
8.The speaker did not rely on notes throughout the speech.-3
The speaker started the speech without looking the notes. During the presentaion, she often checked the script, but entirely, she tried to present without looking at it. Also she had a lot of eye contacts with the audience.
9.What could the speaker have done differently to make the speech more effective?
It would have been better, if she used more stresses or pauses during her presentation.
10.What did you like about the presentation?
The material she presented was very interesting. I have used SNS for a long time, but I haven't thougt of those side effects. However, after listeing to her presentaion, I thought that I have to be more careful in using SNS and find ways to effectively use it. Also the beginning part was interesting enough to get the audience's attention
The general purpose of her speech is to infrom the audience about the ways to use social networking wisely. It was written on the board during the presentation, which helped me to know the purpose of the speech.
2.The specific purpose of the speech was clear.-2
After her presentaion, I could realize what problems can be occurred of using SNS and wise ways to settle those problems. She explained those things with examples.
3.The speech organization supported the speech’s specific purpose.-1
Her speech was well organized with opening, body and conclusion. She used a skethchbook during presenting the body part. It made the audience focus on the letter on the sketchbook. Then she put it down before the concusion to gather the audience's attention back to her.
4.The main points and supporting material contributed to the speech’s specific purpose.-2
There were 4 questions which she asked to the audiences. Each questions had problems and she explained those problems with examples. Then she suggested certain solutions to slove those. All the questions and solutions were related to the purpose of the presentaion.
5.The beginning, body, and conclusion reinforced the specific purpose.-2
At the beginning, She asks a question to the audience. "Is there anyone who doesn't have a Facebook account?." Then she says "You guys are more than ready ro listen to my talk." It makes me to get curious about what she is going to say. In the body part, she asks us 4 questions that we have to ask ourselves. At the conclusion, she asks if we can answer those questions that she asked prefviously. Then she gives some advices and recommendations on using SNS widely.
6.The speaker achieved the specific purpose.-2
She had her presentaiom by using detailed examples. She also cited about the expert's saying to help the understanding.
7.The speaker appeared confident and sincere, with minimal nervousness. -3
Her voice was very calm and audible. Also she was very confident and had many eye contacts with the audience.
8.The speaker did not rely on notes throughout the speech.-3
The speaker started the speech without looking the notes. During the presentaion, she often checked the script, but entirely, she tried to present without looking at it. Also she had a lot of eye contacts with the audience.
9.What could the speaker have done differently to make the speech more effective?
It would have been better, if she used more stresses or pauses during her presentation.
10.What did you like about the presentation?
The material she presented was very interesting. I have used SNS for a long time, but I haven't thougt of those side effects. However, after listeing to her presentaion, I thought that I have to be more careful in using SNS and find ways to effectively use it. Also the beginning part was interesting enough to get the audience's attention
Title: What you have to know before you adopt cats Evaluator: Juyeon Lee Date: October 16th, 2016
• The general purpose of the speech was clear. 1 I think the general purpose of her speech was clear. She wanted to let you know what to do before adopting cats.
• The specific purpose of the speech was clear. 1 She told us about the things you should know before having a cat. There were 3 things. First, cats become sick easily. So you have to take care of them very carefully and continuously. Second, cats are very different from some prejudices. They are not really independent and needs your love. Lastly, you have to keep them until the end of their lives even if they gets ugly and sick.
• The speech organization supported the speech's specific purpose. 2 She began her presentation by asking the audience some questions like, “Is here anyone who keeps pets?”. And she keeps her speech with an expression, “Animal Companion”. I think it is very nice way to start a presentation and get people’s attention.
• The main points and supporting material contributed to the speech's specific purpose. 1 She introduced us her own cat in the middle of the presentation. We could see her picture on the screen and she looked so adorable and enough to get our attention. We could understand more easily by listening to the cat’s story.
• The beginning, body and conclusion reinforced the specific purpose. 2 I think she did a great job in this point. The introduction was very interesting and body was also pretty informative. In the conclusion, she summed up all the things she said in the presentation so it was easy to figure out what the specific purpose was.
• The speaker achieved the specific purpose. 1 I think so because now I knew what I should do before adopting cats. I got to know more about cats. It is a new fact that i didn’t know before.
• The speaker appeared confident and sincere, with minimal nervousness. 2 Her voice was loud and clear, easy to understand. But she did not speak with varied intonation often. So it sometimes sounded like she just memorized everything. However, she seemed confident from the beginning till the end, not really nervous.
• The speaker did not rely on notes throughout the speech. 2 She tried to keep eye contacts constantly but still relied on notes a bit. I think it would be better if her notes are smaller because the size of the script is quite noticeable.
• What could the speaker have done differently to make the speech more effective? 2 I have almost no complaints about her presentation but if there is one thing, i would say it would be more interesting if she put more visual aids on her slides. (e.g. a video of her own cat)
• What did you like about the presentation? 2 I think it was quite informative speech. Since all of my parents are allergic to furs, I could not even think about having a “furry” pet at home. But in fact, I would like to have one when i live on my own. Considering the future, it was an essential lecture for me, who want to be a pet owner. There were some prejudices I had before, like “cats are independent” but now i know that it is not true.
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Date: October 16th, 2016
Speaker: Choongsil Kim
Evaluator: Jiyoung Lee
Title: How to use social networing wisely.
1.The general purpose of the speech was clear.1
The general purpose of her speech is to infrom the audience. she used the research results, so it make it more reliable.
2.The specific purpose of the speech was clear.1
her specific purpose was "to inform some ways to use social networking wisely."
she mentioned 4 ways, and it was well supported with some reasons.
3.The speech organization supported the speech’s specific purpose.2
Her speech was well organized with opening, body and conclusion.
4.The main points and supporting material contributed to the speech’s specific purpose.2
she mentioned 4 problems and for the each problem, and she suggested solutions to slove those. and she also used many researches to inform us.
5.The beginning, body, and conclusion reinforced the specific purpose.2
At the beginning, She asked a question to the audience. there were no one who didn't have the facebook account. it makes me concentrate on her presentation. In the body part, she said 4 problems and solutions using the sketchbook. it makes me more focus on it. for the conclusion, finally she gave some advices for using SNS wisely.
6.The speaker achieved the specific purpose.2
at least for me, her information was quite useful
7.The speaker appeared confident and sincere, with minimal nervousness.1
she didn't nervous at all. her voice was full of confidence. and loud enough to hear
8.The speaker did not rely on notes throughout the speech.2
she didn't bring the script. but only rely on it when she quote the expert's saying. I understood1 cause it is hard to memorize all.. but it doesn't bother me concentrating!
9.What could the speaker have done differently to make the speech more effective?
if she use some chart or pictures, it would be better.
10.What did you like about the presentation?
I was personally very impressed by her presentation. She prepared it almost perfectly..!! and seems very confident. also contents was useful.
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ReplyDeleteDate: October 17th, 2016
Speaker: Choongsil Kim
Evaluator: Seungyeon Lee
Title: How to use social networing wisely.
1.The general purpose of the speech was clear.-1
The general purpose of her speech is to infrom the audience about the ways to use social networking wisely. It was written on the board during the presentation, which helped me to know the purpose of the speech.
2.The specific purpose of the speech was clear.-2
After her presentaion, I could realize what problems can be occurred of using SNS and wise ways to settle those problems. She explained those things with examples.
3.The speech organization supported the speech’s specific purpose.-1
Her speech was well organized with opening, body and conclusion. She used a skethchbook during presenting the body part. It made the audience focus on the letter on the sketchbook. Then she put it down before the concusion to gather the audience's attention back to her.
4.The main points and supporting material contributed to the speech’s specific purpose.-2
There were 4 questions which she asked to the audiences. Each questions had problems and she explained those problems with examples. Then she suggested certain solutions to slove those. All the questions and solutions were related to the purpose of the presentaion.
5.The beginning, body, and conclusion reinforced the specific purpose.-2
At the beginning, She asks a question to the audience. "Is there anyone who doesn't have a Facebook account?." Then she says "You guys are more than ready ro listen to my talk." It makes me to get curious about what she is going to say. In the body part, she asks us 4 questions that we have to ask ourselves. At the conclusion, she asks if we can answer those questions that she asked prefviously. Then she gives some advices and recommendations on using SNS widely.
6.The speaker achieved the specific purpose.-2
She had her presentaiom by using detailed examples. She also cited about the expert's saying to help the understanding.
7.The speaker appeared confident and sincere, with minimal nervousness. -3
Her voice was very calm and audible. Also she was very confident and had many eye contacts with the audience.
8.The speaker did not rely on notes throughout the speech.-3
The speaker started the speech without looking the notes. During the presentaion, she often checked the script, but entirely, she tried to present without looking at it. Also she had a lot of eye contacts with the audience.
9.What could the speaker have done differently to make the speech more effective?
It would have been better, if she used more stresses or pauses during her presentation.
10.What did you like about the presentation?
The material she presented was very interesting. I have used SNS for a long time, but I haven't thougt of those side effects. However, after listeing to her presentaion, I thought that I have to be more careful in using SNS and find ways to effectively use it. Also the beginning part was interesting enough to get the audience's attention
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ReplyDeleteDate: October 17th, 2016
Speaker: Choongsil Kim
Evaluator: Seungyeon Lee
Title: How to use social networing wisely.
1.The general purpose of the speech was clear.-1
The general purpose of her speech is to infrom the audience about the ways to use social networking wisely. It was written on the board during the presentation, which helped me to know the purpose of the speech.
2.The specific purpose of the speech was clear.-2
After her presentaion, I could realize what problems can be occurred of using SNS and wise ways to settle those problems. She explained those things with examples.
3.The speech organization supported the speech’s specific purpose.-1
Her speech was well organized with opening, body and conclusion. She used a skethchbook during presenting the body part. It made the audience focus on the letter on the sketchbook. Then she put it down before the concusion to gather the audience's attention back to her.
4.The main points and supporting material contributed to the speech’s specific purpose.-2
There were 4 questions which she asked to the audiences. Each questions had problems and she explained those problems with examples. Then she suggested certain solutions to slove those. All the questions and solutions were related to the purpose of the presentaion.
5.The beginning, body, and conclusion reinforced the specific purpose.-2
At the beginning, She asks a question to the audience. "Is there anyone who doesn't have a Facebook account?." Then she says "You guys are more than ready ro listen to my talk." It makes me to get curious about what she is going to say. In the body part, she asks us 4 questions that we have to ask ourselves. At the conclusion, she asks if we can answer those questions that she asked prefviously. Then she gives some advices and recommendations on using SNS widely.
6.The speaker achieved the specific purpose.-2
She had her presentaiom by using detailed examples. She also cited about the expert's saying to help the understanding.
7.The speaker appeared confident and sincere, with minimal nervousness. -3
Her voice was very calm and audible. Also she was very confident and had many eye contacts with the audience.
8.The speaker did not rely on notes throughout the speech.-3
The speaker started the speech without looking the notes. During the presentaion, she often checked the script, but entirely, she tried to present without looking at it. Also she had a lot of eye contacts with the audience.
9.What could the speaker have done differently to make the speech more effective?
It would have been better, if she used more stresses or pauses during her presentation.
10.What did you like about the presentation?
The material she presented was very interesting. I have used SNS for a long time, but I haven't thougt of those side effects. However, after listeing to her presentaion, I thought that I have to be more careful in using SNS and find ways to effectively use it. Also the beginning part was interesting enough to get the audience's attention
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ReplyDeleteTitle: What you have to know before you adopt cats
Evaluator: Juyeon Lee
Date: October 16th, 2016
• The general purpose of the speech was clear. 1
I think the general purpose of her speech was clear. She wanted to let you know what to do before adopting cats.
• The specific purpose of the speech was clear. 1
She told us about the things you should know before having a cat. There were 3 things. First, cats become sick easily. So you have to take care of them very carefully and continuously. Second, cats are very different from some prejudices. They are not really independent and needs your love. Lastly, you have to keep them until the end of their lives even if they gets ugly and sick.
• The speech organization supported the speech's specific purpose. 2
She began her presentation by asking the audience some questions like, “Is here anyone who keeps pets?”. And she keeps her speech with an expression, “Animal Companion”. I think it is very nice way to start a presentation and get people’s attention.
• The main points and supporting material contributed to the speech's specific purpose. 1
She introduced us her own cat in the middle of the presentation. We could see her picture on the screen and she looked so adorable and enough to get our attention. We could understand more easily by listening to the cat’s story.
• The beginning, body and conclusion reinforced the specific purpose. 2
I think she did a great job in this point. The introduction was very interesting and body was also pretty informative. In the conclusion, she summed up all the things she said in the presentation so it was easy to figure out what the specific purpose was.
• The speaker achieved the specific purpose. 1
I think so because now I knew what I should do before adopting cats. I got to know more about cats. It is a new fact that i didn’t know before.
• The speaker appeared confident and sincere, with minimal nervousness. 2
Her voice was loud and clear, easy to understand. But she did not speak with varied intonation often. So it sometimes sounded like she just memorized everything. However, she seemed confident from the beginning till the end, not really nervous.
• The speaker did not rely on notes throughout the speech. 2
She tried to keep eye contacts constantly but still relied on notes a bit. I think it would be better if her notes are smaller because the size of the script is quite noticeable.
• What could the speaker have done differently to make the speech more effective? 2
I have almost no complaints about her presentation but if there is one thing, i would say it would be more interesting if she put more visual aids on her slides. (e.g. a video of her own cat)
• What did you like about the presentation? 2
I think it was quite informative speech. Since all of my parents are allergic to furs, I could not even think about having a “furry” pet at home. But in fact, I would like to have one when i live on my own. Considering the future, it was an essential lecture for me, who want to be a pet owner. There were some prejudices I had before, like “cats are independent” but now i know that it is not true.