Title: How to diet healthy to lose weight Evaluator: Kyeong Ju Seo
• The general purpose of the speech was clear. 1 The general purpose of the speech was to inform the audience. • The specific purpose of the speech was clear. 1 The specific purpose was to suggest various ways to diet healthy to lose weight. • The speech organization supported the speech's specific purpose. 1 The speech was organized well with good introduction, body and conclusion. • The main points and supporting material contributed to the speech's specific purpose. 1 There were supporting materials for each of the main points that were detailed enough for the listeners. • The beginning, body and conclusion reinforced the specific purpose. 1 She began the speech by asking the audience a question of whether they had their own experiences in diet which gave the audience some time to reflect on their own experiences in diet. The body part consists of four main tips to lose weight in a healthy manner. The conclusion wrapped up the whole presentation. • The speaker achieved the specific purpose. 1 As I listened, I wanted to try a few things she mentioned like drinking more green tea and water. • The speaker appeared confident and sincere, with minimal nervousness. 3 It would have been great if she spoke up a little bit more with some intonations in her speech. She didn’t seem nervous but she did seem a little bit shy. • The speaker did not rely on notes throughout the speech. 3 At the beginning of her speech, she did great eye contact with the audience. But as she went into the body part of her speech her eyes were set on the podium from time to time. • What could the speaker have done differently to make the speech more effective? This presentation would be been perfect if she didn’t read her script. Maybe next time, she could try without the notes. Also, her speech was very calm starting from the beginning to the end which is alright but maybe if she is making a new point, she could point it out with some different intonation. • What did you like about the presentation? I really liked her topic because as a girl who always fails in dieting, her tips were easy to follow and really helpful. I think I will try out some of the tips she has mentioned in her speech. Also, I liked her conclusion of the speech where she points out that her tips may be too easy but that is actually her point. I totally agree with her that in order to succeed in diet, the methods have to be easy to achieve in our daily lives.
Title: How to diet healthy to lose weight
ReplyDeleteEvaluator: Kyeong Ju Seo
• The general purpose of the speech was clear. 1
The general purpose of the speech was to inform the audience.
• The specific purpose of the speech was clear. 1
The specific purpose was to suggest various ways to diet healthy to lose weight.
• The speech organization supported the speech's specific purpose. 1
The speech was organized well with good introduction, body and conclusion.
• The main points and supporting material contributed to the speech's specific purpose. 1
There were supporting materials for each of the main points that were detailed enough for the listeners.
• The beginning, body and conclusion reinforced the specific purpose. 1
She began the speech by asking the audience a question of whether they had their own experiences in diet which gave the audience some time to reflect on their own experiences in diet. The body part consists of four main tips to lose weight in a healthy manner. The conclusion wrapped up the whole presentation.
• The speaker achieved the specific purpose. 1
As I listened, I wanted to try a few things she mentioned like drinking more green tea and water.
• The speaker appeared confident and sincere, with minimal nervousness. 3
It would have been great if she spoke up a little bit more with some intonations in her speech. She didn’t seem nervous but she did seem a little bit shy.
• The speaker did not rely on notes throughout the speech. 3
At the beginning of her speech, she did great eye contact with the audience. But as she went into the body part of her speech her eyes were set on the podium from time to time.
• What could the speaker have done differently to make the speech more effective?
This presentation would be been perfect if she didn’t read her script. Maybe next time, she could try without the notes. Also, her speech was very calm starting from the beginning to the end which is alright but maybe if she is making a new point, she could point it out with some different intonation.
• What did you like about the presentation?
I really liked her topic because as a girl who always fails in dieting, her tips were easy to follow and really helpful. I think I will try out some of the tips she has mentioned in her speech. Also, I liked her conclusion of the speech where she points out that her tips may be too easy but that is actually her point. I totally agree with her that in order to succeed in diet, the methods have to be easy to achieve in our daily lives.
Kyeong Ju Seo