The general purpose of his speech is to alert the audience about the dangers of living near the school. He uses statistics to strengthen his logics.
2.The specific purpose of the speech was clear.-2
After his presentaion, I could realize why I should care for global warming.
3.The speech organization supported the speech’s specific purpose.-1
His speech was well organized with opening, body and conclusion. At the end of the opening, he told that he is going to talk about some data with traditional view and contemporary view
4.The main points and supporting material contributed to the speech’s specific purpose.-3
There were several main points and each had supporing details. All the main points were related to the main point of the presentation. Also, each details were specific enough to support the main points.
5.The beginning, body, and conclusion reinforced the specific purpose.-2
He started his speech with what he is going to say. He says he'll show some data related to his main ideas. She explains official protocols and mady datas in the body parts. At the conclusion, he summarizes body part, and finish the speech
6.The speaker achieved the specific purpose.-2
He explained the importance of why we should care about this.
7.The speaker appeared confident and sincere, with minimal nervousness. -1
His voice was a little bit quiet but I could hear.
8.The speaker did not rely on notes throughout the speech.-2
He sometimes looks down but not relied on it.
9.What could the speaker have done differently to make the speech more effective?
It would have been better, if he had stood in front of projector.
10.What did you like about the presentation?
He delivered important lesson to us in simple, light mood. It wasn't difficult to understand his speech.
His general purpose is to make audience think about the global warming.
2.The specific purpose of the speech was clear.1
His specific purpose was to let audience know that the global warming could be a natural phenomenon.
3.The speech organization supported the speech’s specific purpose. 1
He started the speech with mentioning the global warming and he mentioned that some scientists think that the global warming is just a natural cycle. It made me pay attention to his speech and think it from the other viewpoint. It helped me to think that it could be just a natural cycle.
4.The main points and supporting material contributed to the speech’s specific purpose.1
His statistic data strengthened the argument of natural cycle theory. It helped me to stand on the side of natural cycle theory.
5.The speaker achieved the specific purpose.1
Becuase of this speech, I changed my opinion about the global warming and think it is a natural phenomenon.
6.The speaker appeared confident and sincere, with minimal nervousness. 2
More higher volume would be better. But he was confident through whole speech.
7.The speaker did not rely on notes throughout the speech. 2
He used his script sometimes but he didn't rely on it.
8.What could the speaker have done differently to make the speech more effective?
I think more simple data would be good because it's hard to identify through the screen.
9.What did you like about the presentation?
He made his point even though it was a really complicated subject. Moreover, I think his choice on the topic was great.
Speaking Feedback
ReplyDeleteDate: October 18th, 2016
Speaker: Do hyun Lim
Evaluator: Young Ho Chun
Title: Global warming
1.The general purpose of the speech was clear.-1
The general purpose of his speech is to alert the audience about the dangers of living near the school. He uses statistics to strengthen his logics.
2.The specific purpose of the speech was clear.-2
After his presentaion, I could realize why I should care for global warming.
3.The speech organization supported the speech’s specific purpose.-1
His speech was well organized with opening, body and conclusion. At the end of the opening, he told that he is going to talk about some data with traditional view and contemporary view
4.The main points and supporting material contributed to the speech’s specific purpose.-3
There were several main points and each had supporing details. All the main points were related to the main point of the presentation. Also, each details were specific enough to support the main points.
5.The beginning, body, and conclusion reinforced the specific purpose.-2
He started his speech with what he is going to say. He says he'll show some data related to his main ideas. She explains official protocols and mady datas in the body parts. At the conclusion, he summarizes body part, and finish the speech
6.The speaker achieved the specific purpose.-2
He explained the importance of why we should care about this.
7.The speaker appeared confident and sincere, with minimal nervousness. -1
His voice was a little bit quiet but I could hear.
8.The speaker did not rely on notes throughout the speech.-2
He sometimes looks down but not relied on it.
9.What could the speaker have done differently to make the speech more effective?
It would have been better, if he had stood in front of projector.
10.What did you like about the presentation?
He delivered important lesson to us in simple, light mood. It wasn't difficult to understand his speech.
Speaking Feedback
ReplyDeleteEvaluator: Jisu Kim
Title: Global warming
1.The general purpose of the speech was clear. 1
His general purpose is to make audience think about the global warming.
2.The specific purpose of the speech was clear.1
His specific purpose was to let audience know that the global warming could be a natural phenomenon.
3.The speech organization supported the speech’s specific purpose. 1
He started the speech with mentioning the global warming and he mentioned that some scientists think that the global warming is just a natural cycle. It made me pay attention to his speech and think it from the other viewpoint. It helped me to think that it could be just a natural cycle.
4.The main points and supporting material contributed to the speech’s specific purpose.1
His statistic data strengthened the argument of natural cycle theory. It helped me to stand on the side of natural cycle theory.
5.The speaker achieved the specific purpose.1
Becuase of this speech, I changed my opinion about the global warming and think it is a natural phenomenon.
6.The speaker appeared confident and sincere, with minimal nervousness. 2
More higher volume would be better. But he was confident through whole speech.
7.The speaker did not rely on notes throughout the speech. 2
He used his script sometimes but he didn't rely on it.
8.What could the speaker have done differently to make the speech more effective?
I think more simple data would be good because it's hard to identify through the screen.
9.What did you like about the presentation?
He made his point even though it was a really complicated subject. Moreover, I think his choice on the topic was great.