Title: 3 consumption Trends in Korea Feedback: Jeonghee Lee Date: 2016. 10. 21
- What did you like about the presentation?
I think her purpose of informing the audience about the 3 consumption trends in Korea was clear and I think she achieved her purpose well. I liked her voice which was very clear and audible. Her speed was also helped me to understand the presentation more easily. Also, I think the visuals were also very helpful for the audience and the purpose of her presentation.
- What could the speaker have done differently to make the speech more effective?
I think it would've been better if she had not said "Sorry" when she made a mistake. When she said "baedaltong" accidently, she apologized. However, I think the presenter should never apologize to the audience even though we make mistakes, especially if the presentation's purpose is to inform. That's because if the presenter say sorry, it will make the presenter look not confident and may give the impression that the speaker is not well-prepared, so I think the speaker should not apologize when making mistakes. Also, I think it would've been better if the presenter had made more hand gestures and had used notes more efficiently. The gestures would've helped the speaker to look more natural. Also, the speaker used "Um..." a lot and looked down a lot, but if she had used notes or memorized more thoroughly, I think it would've helped the presenter with the flow.
Title: 3 consumption Trends in Korea
ReplyDeleteFeedback: Jeonghee Lee
Date: 2016. 10. 21
- What did you like about the presentation?
I think her purpose of informing the audience about the 3 consumption trends in Korea was clear and I think she achieved her purpose well. I liked her voice which was very clear and audible. Her speed was also helped me to understand the presentation more easily. Also, I think the visuals were also very helpful for the audience and the purpose of her presentation.
- What could the speaker have done differently to make the speech more effective?
I think it would've been better if she had not said "Sorry" when she made a mistake. When she said "baedaltong" accidently, she apologized. However, I think the presenter should never apologize to the audience even though we make mistakes, especially if the presentation's purpose is to inform. That's because if the presenter say sorry, it will make the presenter look not confident and may give the impression that the speaker is not well-prepared, so I think the speaker should not apologize when making mistakes. Also, I think it would've been better if the presenter had made more hand gestures and had used notes more efficiently. The gestures would've helped the speaker to look more natural. Also, the speaker used "Um..." a lot and looked down a lot, but if she had used notes or memorized more thoroughly, I think it would've helped the presenter with the flow.
Speaking Feedback
ReplyDeleteEvaluator: Jisu Kim
Title: 3 Consumption trends in Korea
1.The general purpose of the speech was clear. 1
Her general purpose was to let audience know about the 3 trends in Korea.
2.The specific purpose of the speech was clear.1
Her specific purpose was to inform the reasons of these trends.
3.The speech organization supported the speech’s specific purpose. 1
She started the speech with a story associated with trend and this way of beginning made me guess what the topic of speech.
4.The main points and supporting material contributed to the speech’s specific purpose.1
She used a lot of visual materials like graphs and pictures. It supported her specific purpose very well.
5.The speaker achieved the specific purpose.1
This speech informed me about the trends and the reasons of these.
6.The speaker appeared confident and sincere, with minimal nervousness. 2
Her voice was clear but she seems embarassed when she made a mistake. But I can see her confidence through whole speech.
7.The speaker did not rely on notes throughout the speech. 2
I think she used her script sometimes but she didn't rely on it.
8.What could the speaker have done differently to make the speech more effective?
I think it would be better if she give a speech in front of audience.
9.What did you like about the presentation?
Topic of speech was very good and very informative. Moreover,finding reasons of the trends was very interesting and persuasive.