Title: Fat is Fab Evaluator: Jeonghee Lee Date: October 13th, 2016
• The general purpose of the speech was clear. 1
The general purpose of my speech was to inform the audience about ‘high-fat diet', and I think it was pretty clear.
• The specific purpose of the speech was clear. 1 After hearing my presentation, I think the audience will be able to identify the benefits of high-fat and many people’s misconceptions about fat. Also, I think they can list the high-fat food that is beneficial for our health and diet after hearing my presentation, so I think my specific purpose was clear.
• The speech organization supported the speech's specific purpose. 3
My presentation was organized with beginning, 3 bodies and conclusion, and I think they supported the specific purpose quite well. However, it would've been better if I had explained briefly about the 3 bodies at the beginning to help the audience get the idea of the main points of my speech.
• The main points and supporting material contributed to the speech's specific purpose. 1
I think the main points, which were the reason why fat is beneficial for people who are trying to lose weight, the LCHF diet and the people who succeeded losing weight by LCHF diet and some foods that are high in fat, and the ppt slides contributed to the speech's specific purpose quite well. I think my ppt slides were very useful and helped the audience to understand the speech. They were especially helpful when I tried to explain about the negative result of excessive amount of blood sugar and insulin.
• The beginning, body and conclusion reinforced the specific purpose. 2
I think the coherence of the beginning, body and conclusion was good, so I think they reinforced the specific purpose. I also used expressions like "Let's move on to~" and "We now know that~, then~ ?" to signal that I am moving on to the next idea. I think these helped the audiences to follow and to understand the main points of my presentation.
• The speaker achieved the specific purpose. 2
I believe that the audience can identify the benefits of high-fat, which is helping us to lose weight, and many people’s misconception about fat after my presentation. I also think they can list the high-fat food that is beneficial for our health and diet, which are pork, beef, fish, and green-leaf vegetables.
• The speaker appeared confident and sincere, with minimal nervousness. 3
Even though I was and I looked quite confident with loud voice and big gestures during my speech, when I made mistakes and stuttered, I looked a little embarrassed and nervous.
• The speaker did not rely on notes throughout the speech. 1
Not to rely on notes, I had to prepare and practice a lot. I didn't memorize every single word of my script, but I memorized the ideas that I wanted to talk about and the flow of my presentation. So I used different words and different sentences every time I practiced, but this way of practicing helped me a lot when I took the presentation video.
• What could the speaker have done differently to make the speech more effective?
As I mentioned above, I think it would've been better if I explained briefly about the main points of my presentation at the beginning. Then, I think the audiences could've followed my speech more easily. Also, I think I shouldn't smile when I make mistakes, because whenever I paused to come up with words, I smiled and I think this made me more nervous.
• What did you like about the presentation?
I think I spoke in loud voice and made big open gestures which made me look confident. Also, I think my eye-contacts and interactions with the audiences were pretty good. I believe that my hook at the beginning of the presentation was also quite interesting and I'm pretty sure that I got the audiences' attention at the beggining of the presentation thanks to the hook.
Title: LCHF Diet Evaluator: Kweonho Lee Date: 16/10/14 • The general purpose of the speech was clear. 1 The general purpose of the speech was to inform the benefits of fats for the people who are on diet. The purpose was clear because she started with an interesting fact about fat in the beginning. • The specific purpose of the speech was clear. 1 The specific purpose was to suggest losing weight from LCHF diet. Because she mentioned about the benefits of fat in our body and introduced some people who were successful in losing weight, the specific purpose was clear. She also had a suggestion in the end. • The speech organization supported the speech's specific purpose. 1 The organization helped me to understand the specific purpose. The presenter showed the benefits of fat in our body by explaining the process of food consumption and introduced some good samples of the successful diet. The organization was good because the benefits seemed more convincing and impressive after looking at the photos of the people. • The main points and supporting material contributed to the speech's specific purpose. 1 The main points were clear and I liked her supporting material because she lots of visual aids. The pictures of human body with insulin and blood sugar definitely helped me understand the contents. Otherwise, I would have lost track and got confused. • The beginning, body and conclusion reinforced the specific purpose. 2 The presenter began her presentation by giving an interesting situation to think about. It was a good hook to grab the attention of the audience. In the body, she uses lots of visual aids in the screen to help the audience understand the contents. Also, the presenter summarizes the main points in the end to clarify her purpose of the presentation. • The speaker achieved the specific purpose. 1 I found the information valuable and interesting. I will consider starting the LCHF diet. • The speaker appeared confident and sincere, with minimal nervousness. 1 The speaker looked very much confident. I liked the volume of her voice because it was loud enough to hear clearly. She also varied her intonation to stress some important words and it surely helped her in drawing attention of the audience. The use of gestures with smile made her look even more confident. • The speaker did not rely on notes throughout the speech. 1 The speaker seemed to be fully prepared as she kept on making eye contacts with the audience without looking at any notes. • What could the speaker have done differently to make the speech more effective? In some parts, I thought the speech rate was too fast and the speaker seemed a little rushed to give lots of information on time. Considering that the speech is an informative speech which conveys new information to the audience, slowing down and adding pauses may be more effective. Also, as a male audience, the opening hook failed to grab my attention because I’m not going to wear a wedding dress. I felt like I chose the wrong video. • What did you like about the presentation? The topic and contents were interesting. The presenter seemed to have prepared a lot because there wasn’t any big mistake that I could notice and she looked really confident of herself. 201202334 Kweonho Lee
Speaking Feedback Date : October 16th, 2016 Speaker: Jeonghee Lee Evaluator: Donghyang Lee Title : Fat is Fab
• The general purpose of the speech was clear. 1 Her speech was to inform that fat isn’t bad for your health and about high-fat diet.
• The specific purpose of the speech was clear. 1 She wanted to tell the audience about how fat can benefits to people to lose weight and the misconceptions about fat.
• The speech organization supported the speech's specific purpose. 1 She had organized the speech very well and supported her purpose quite well too. She briefly explain her main point at the beginning so it was easily to understand what she wanted to tell us.
• The main points and supporting material contributed to the speech's specific purpose. 1 In my opinion, her PowerPoint was useful and made audience to understand easily and it contributes her specific point which is why fat I beneficial for a person who is trying to lose weight. She also explained about LCHF and gave examples of people who have succeed their diet by LCHF diet.
• The beginning, body and conclusion reinforced the specific purpose. 1 Her introduction, body and conclusion reinforced the specific point quite well. She also used many hand gestures when she describe and used expression when she moving on to the next step. It was really useful to follow her.
• The speaker achieved the specific purpose. 1 I think that she had achieved specific purpose because she had explain why fat is beneficial and made the audiences be interested in LCHF diet.
• The speaker appeared confident and sincere, with minimal nervousness. Her voice while giving the speech was loud and clear enough. Her speaking speed was stabled and seems to be confident. She also stressed those important words so it was helpful to understand and could catch up easily.
• The speaker did not rely on notes throughout the speech. She didn’t relied on the notes at all, which is really amazing. It shows that she had prepared over and over again many times. Also she made many eye-contacts with audiences and didn’t look at camera a lot.
• What could the speaker have done differently to make the speech more effective? Her speech was great. However, some parts, she was a little rush. It would have been better if she made some pauses so the audience can catch what she’s trying to inform us. Anything else was all perfect, in my opinion.
• What did you like about the presentation? I love her loud and clear voice. Also her confident is what I want to compliment! As I said before, her confident seems to be made up from her preparation. Also, I liked about the information about LCHF diet because it was interesting and I’ve never knew before.
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Title: Fat is Fab
Evaluator: Jeonghee Lee Date: October 13th, 2016
• The general purpose of the speech was clear. 1
The general purpose of my speech was to inform the audience about ‘high-fat diet', and I think it was pretty clear.
• The specific purpose of the speech was clear. 1
After hearing my presentation, I think the audience will be able to identify the benefits of high-fat and many people’s misconceptions about fat. Also, I think they can list the high-fat food that is beneficial for our health and diet after hearing my presentation, so I think my specific purpose was clear.
• The speech organization supported the speech's specific purpose. 3
My presentation was organized with beginning, 3 bodies and conclusion, and I think they supported the specific purpose quite well. However, it would've been better if I had explained briefly about the 3 bodies at the beginning to help the audience get the idea of the main points of my speech.
• The main points and supporting material contributed to the speech's specific purpose. 1
I think the main points, which were the reason why fat is beneficial for people who are trying to lose weight, the LCHF diet and the people who succeeded losing weight by LCHF diet and some foods that are high in fat, and the ppt slides contributed to the speech's specific purpose quite well. I think my ppt slides were very useful and helped the audience to understand the speech. They were especially helpful when I tried to explain about the negative result of excessive amount of blood sugar and insulin.
• The beginning, body and conclusion reinforced the specific purpose. 2
I think the coherence of the beginning, body and conclusion was good, so I think they reinforced the specific purpose. I also used expressions like "Let's move on to~" and "We now know that~, then~ ?" to signal that I am moving on to the next idea. I think these helped the audiences to follow and to understand the main points of my presentation.
• The speaker achieved the specific purpose. 2
I believe that the audience can identify the benefits of high-fat, which is helping us to lose weight, and many people’s misconception about fat after my presentation. I also think they can list the high-fat food that is beneficial for our health and diet, which are pork, beef, fish, and green-leaf vegetables.
• The speaker appeared confident and sincere, with minimal nervousness. 3
Even though I was and I looked quite confident with loud voice and big gestures during my speech, when I made mistakes and stuttered, I looked a little embarrassed and nervous.
• The speaker did not rely on notes throughout the speech. 1
Not to rely on notes, I had to prepare and practice a lot. I didn't memorize every single word of my script, but I memorized the ideas that I wanted to talk about and the flow of my presentation. So I used different words and different sentences every time I practiced, but this way of practicing helped me a lot when I took the presentation video.
• What could the speaker have done differently to make the speech more effective?
As I mentioned above, I think it would've been better if I explained briefly about the main points of my presentation at the beginning. Then, I think the audiences could've followed my speech more easily. Also, I think I shouldn't smile when I make mistakes, because whenever I paused to come up with words, I smiled and I think this made me more nervous.
• What did you like about the presentation?
I think I spoke in loud voice and made big open gestures which made me look confident. Also, I think my eye-contacts and interactions with the audiences were pretty good. I believe that my hook at the beginning of the presentation was also quite interesting and I'm pretty sure that I got the audiences' attention at the beggining of the presentation thanks to the hook.
Title: LCHF Diet
ReplyDeleteEvaluator: Kweonho Lee
Date: 16/10/14
• The general purpose of the speech was clear. 1
The general purpose of the speech was to inform the benefits of fats for the people who are on diet. The purpose was clear because she started with an interesting fact about fat in the beginning.
• The specific purpose of the speech was clear. 1
The specific purpose was to suggest losing weight from LCHF diet. Because she mentioned about the benefits of fat in our body and introduced some people who were successful in losing weight, the specific purpose was clear. She also had a suggestion in the end.
• The speech organization supported the speech's specific purpose. 1
The organization helped me to understand the specific purpose. The presenter showed the benefits of fat in our body by explaining the process of food consumption and introduced some good samples of the successful diet. The organization was good because the benefits seemed more convincing and impressive after looking at the photos of the people.
• The main points and supporting material contributed to the speech's specific purpose. 1
The main points were clear and I liked her supporting material because she lots of visual aids. The pictures of human body with insulin and blood sugar definitely helped me understand the contents. Otherwise, I would have lost track and got confused.
• The beginning, body and conclusion reinforced the specific purpose. 2
The presenter began her presentation by giving an interesting situation to think about. It was a good hook to grab the attention of the audience. In the body, she uses lots of visual aids in the screen to help the audience understand the contents. Also, the presenter summarizes the main points in the end to clarify her purpose of the presentation.
• The speaker achieved the specific purpose. 1
I found the information valuable and interesting. I will consider starting the LCHF diet.
• The speaker appeared confident and sincere, with minimal nervousness. 1
The speaker looked very much confident. I liked the volume of her voice because it was loud enough to hear clearly. She also varied her intonation to stress some important words and it surely helped her in drawing attention of the audience. The use of gestures with smile made her look even more confident.
• The speaker did not rely on notes throughout the speech. 1
The speaker seemed to be fully prepared as she kept on making eye contacts with the audience without looking at any notes.
• What could the speaker have done differently to make the speech more effective?
In some parts, I thought the speech rate was too fast and the speaker seemed a little rushed to give lots of information on time. Considering that the speech is an informative speech which conveys new information to the audience, slowing down and adding pauses may be more effective.
Also, as a male audience, the opening hook failed to grab my attention because I’m not going to wear a wedding dress. I felt like I chose the wrong video.
• What did you like about the presentation?
The topic and contents were interesting. The presenter seemed to have prepared a lot because there wasn’t any big mistake that I could notice and she looked really confident of herself.
201202334 Kweonho Lee
Speaking Feedback
ReplyDeleteDate : October 16th, 2016
Speaker: Jeonghee Lee
Evaluator: Donghyang Lee
Title : Fat is Fab
• The general purpose of the speech was clear. 1
Her speech was to inform that fat isn’t bad for your health and about high-fat diet.
• The specific purpose of the speech was clear. 1
She wanted to tell the audience about how fat can benefits to people to lose weight and the misconceptions about fat.
• The speech organization supported the speech's specific purpose. 1
She had organized the speech very well and supported her purpose quite well too. She briefly explain her main point at the beginning so it was easily to understand what she wanted to tell us.
• The main points and supporting material contributed to the speech's specific purpose. 1
In my opinion, her PowerPoint was useful and made audience to understand easily and it contributes her specific point which is why fat I beneficial for a person who is trying to lose weight. She also explained about LCHF and gave examples of people who have succeed their diet by LCHF diet.
• The beginning, body and conclusion reinforced the specific purpose. 1
Her introduction, body and conclusion reinforced the specific point quite well. She also used many hand gestures when she describe and used expression when she moving on to the next step. It was really useful to follow her.
• The speaker achieved the specific purpose. 1
I think that she had achieved specific purpose because she had explain why fat is beneficial and made the audiences be interested in LCHF diet.
• The speaker appeared confident and sincere, with minimal nervousness.
Her voice while giving the speech was loud and clear enough. Her speaking speed was stabled and seems to be confident. She also stressed those important words so it was helpful to understand and could catch up easily.
• The speaker did not rely on notes throughout the speech.
She didn’t relied on the notes at all, which is really amazing. It shows that she had prepared over and over again many times. Also she made many eye-contacts with audiences and didn’t look at camera a lot.
• What could the speaker have done differently to make the speech more effective?
Her speech was great. However, some parts, she was a little rush. It would have been better if she made some pauses so the audience can catch what she’s trying to inform us. Anything else was all perfect, in my opinion.
• What did you like about the presentation?
I love her loud and clear voice. Also her confident is what I want to compliment! As I said before, her confident seems to be made up from her preparation. Also, I liked about the information about LCHF diet because it was interesting and I’ve never knew before.