• What could the speaker have done differently to make the speech more effective?
I think i would have been much better for him to use more hand gesture to make delivery more appealing to the audiences and casting some rhetoric questions regarding the issue might have been interesting too.
• What did you like about the speech? Speaker's choice of the topic is interesting and it can actually be helpful for the audiences as he showed his own experiences in writing effectively, His choice of the words were appropriate and professional enough to convey what he want to say to the audiences.
Evaluation Guide for
ReplyDeleteVocal Variety
Title: How to write effectively
Evaluator: Heo Hoon Young Date: November 27th, 2016
•Topic Selection: _o_Facilitated vocal variety __Satisfactory __Could Improve
•Volume: _o_Excellent __Satisfactory __Too loud or soft
•Rate: _o_Excellent, varied __Satisfactory __Too fast or too slow
•Pitch: __Varied conversational _o_Satisfactory __Monotonous, artificial
•Quality: __Pleasant, friendly _o_Satisfactory __Harsh, monotonous
•Pauses: __Appropriate, effective _o_Satisfactory __Could Improve
•Expressiveness: _o_Conveyed emotion, meaning __Satisfactory __Could Improve
•Vocal Variety: _o_Enhanced speech __Satisfactory __Could Improve
•Organization: __Logical flow of ideas _o_Satisfactory __Should Improve
•Word Usage: __Vivid, descriptive, accurate _o_Satisfactory __Could Improve
•Body Language: _o_Natural, expressive __Satisfactory __Unnatural, distracting
• What could the speaker have done differently to make the speech more effective?
I think i would have been much better for him to use more hand gesture to
make delivery more appealing to the audiences and casting some rhetoric questions
regarding the issue might have been interesting too.
• What did you like about the speech?
Speaker's choice of the topic is interesting and it can actually be helpful
for the audiences as he showed his own experiences in writing effectively,
His choice of the words were appropriate and professional enough to convey
what he want to say to the audiences.
Title : How to write effectively
ReplyDeleteEvaluator : Won Hyeong Kim
Date : 16.11.30
• Topic Selection: _o_Facilitated vocal variety __Satisfactory __Could Improve
• Volume: _o_Excellent __Satisfactory __Too loud or soft
• Rate: _o_Excellent, varied __Satisfactory __Too fast or too slow
• Pitch: __Varied conversational _o_Satisfactory __Monotonous, artificial
• Quality: __Pleasant, friendly _o_Satisfactory __Harsh, monotonous
• Pauses: __Appropriate, effective _o_Satisfactory __Could Improve
• Expressiveness: _o_Conveyed emotion, meaning __Satisfactory __Could Improve
• Vocal Variety: _o_Enhanced speech __Satisfactory __Could Improve
• Organization: _o_Logical flow of ideas __Satisfactory __Should Improve
• Word Usage: _o_Vivid, descriptive, accurate __Satisfactory __Could Improve
• Body Language: __Natural, expressive _o_Satisfactory __Unnatural, distracting
• What could the speaker have done differently to make the speech more effective?
If he use some body languages, it will be better next time.
And his pitch was little bit weak at this time.
• What did you like about the speech?
His topic was very useful for us. And he speaks very fluently. Also his PPT slides were clear.