Title: Keep your anger under control Evaluator: Seungyeon Lee Date: November 28, 2016
• Topic Selection: _o_Facilitated vocal variety __Satisfactory __Could Improve • Volume: _o_Excellent __Satisfactory __Too loud or soft • Rate: _o_Excellent, varied __Satisfactory __Too fast or too slow • Pitch: __Varied conversational _o_Satisfactory __Monotonous, artificial • Quality: __Pleasant, friendly _o_Satisfactory __Harsh, monotonous • Pauses: _o_Appropriate, effective __Satisfactory __Could Improve • Expressiveness: __Conveyed emotion, meaning __Satisfactory _o_Could Improve • Vocal Variety: __Enhanced speech __Satisfactory _o_Could Improve • Organization: _o_Logical flow of ideas __Satisfactory __Should Improve • Word Usage: _o_Vivid, descriptive, accurate __Satisfactory __Could Improve • Body Language: __Natural, expressive __Satisfactory _o_Unnatural, distracting
• What could the speaker have done differently to make the speech more effective? It would have been better if she had more various facial expressions and hand gestures. it was very calm, but could be thought a little bit monotonous in some way. Also, giving more stress on important materials would have helped the concentration of the audiences.
• What did you like about the speech? The topic was very interesting, and I liked the way she organized her speech. she first explained few myths and facts aginst them. then she introduces some methods to control anger. The speech was well organized that it was easy to understand the presentation.
< Vocal Variety Self - Evaluation> Title : Keep your anger under control Speaker : Kim Choong Sil Evaluator : 201303460 Sanghee Choi
• Topic Selection: (o)Facilitated vocal variety __Satisfactory __Could Improve • Volume: __Excellent (o)Satisfactory __Too loud or soft • Rate: (o)Excellent, varied __Satisfactory __Too fast or too slow • Pitch: __Varied conversational __Satisfactory (o)Monotonous, artificial • Quality: (o)Pleasant, friendly __Satisfactory __Harsh, monotonous • Pauses: (o)Appropriate, effective __Satisfactory __Could Improve • Expressiveness: __Conveyed emotion, meaning (o)Satisfactory __Could Improve • Vocal Variety: __Enhanced speech __Satisfactory (o)Could Improve • Organization: (o)Logical flow of ideas __Satisfactory __Should Improve • Word Usage: (o)Vivid, descriptive, accurate __Satisfactory __Could Improve • Body Language: (o)Natural, expressive __Satisfactory __Unnatural, distracting
• What could the speaker have done differently to make the speech more effective? Her speech was great. But it was a little bit plain so she could use more vocal variety methods or put some pauses to make her speech more dynamic. For example, she could put more stress on the truth or solution part.
• What did you like about the speech? The topic was interesting and useful and her ppt slides were very clear. I could learn some new facts that I misunderstood before. Also her speech was well organized so I could clearly understand what she wanted to say.
< Vocal Variety Self - Evaluation> Title: Keep your anger under control Evaluator: Lee Ji Young Date: November 12.5
• Topic Selection: (o)Facilitated vocal variety __Satisfactory __Could Improve • Volume: (o)Excellent __Satisfactory __Too loud or soft • Rate: __Excellent, varied (o)Satisfactory __Too fast or too slow • Pitch: __Varied conversational _0_Satisfactory Monotonous, artificial • Quality: __Pleasant, friendly (o)Satisfactory __Harsh, monotonous • Pauses: __Appropriate, effective (o)Satisfactory __Could Improve • Expressiveness: _0_Conveyed emotion, meaning __Satisfactory Could Improve • Vocal Variety: __Enhanced speech _0_Satisfactory Could Improve • Organization: (o)Logical flow of ideas __Satisfactory __Should Improve • Word Usage: (o)Vivid, descriptive, accurate __Satisfactory __Could Improve • Body Language: __Natural, expressive (o)Satisfactory __Unnatural, distracting
• What could the speaker have done differently to make the speech more effective? ate more to make my speech powerful. this was a informative speech that gives some tips to keep you from loosing temper. she made the presentation question and answer form and broke our common notion about anger. It made her presentation powerful.
• What did you like about the speech? she memorized perfectly! and used body language properly. Also the content was quite useful, cause I'm the one who lost temper easily.
What could the speaker have done differently to make the speech more effective? While presenting this talk, I thought I used vocal variety fairly good, but I realized I could do that better watching this video. For example, I could raise my pitch for question mark. Also I looked in this video too serious, I should have smiled more in front of my audience. Gestures are not natural as much as I expected.
What did you like about the speech? I didn’t rely on notes. Also I’m pretty sure that the audience didn’t have difficulties understanding my presentation, because I tried to use daily-life words. Before I gave a talk, I studied about the anger. Because I knew well about my own topic, my voice sounds quite confident
Title: Keep your anger under control
ReplyDeleteEvaluator: Seungyeon Lee
Date: November 28, 2016
• Topic Selection: _o_Facilitated vocal variety __Satisfactory __Could Improve
• Volume: _o_Excellent __Satisfactory __Too loud or soft
• Rate: _o_Excellent, varied __Satisfactory __Too fast or too slow
• Pitch: __Varied conversational _o_Satisfactory __Monotonous, artificial
• Quality: __Pleasant, friendly _o_Satisfactory __Harsh, monotonous
• Pauses: _o_Appropriate, effective __Satisfactory __Could Improve
• Expressiveness: __Conveyed emotion, meaning __Satisfactory _o_Could Improve
• Vocal Variety: __Enhanced speech __Satisfactory _o_Could Improve
• Organization: _o_Logical flow of ideas __Satisfactory __Should Improve
• Word Usage: _o_Vivid, descriptive, accurate __Satisfactory __Could Improve
• Body Language: __Natural, expressive __Satisfactory _o_Unnatural, distracting
• What could the speaker have done differently to make the speech more effective?
It would have been better if she had more various facial expressions and hand gestures. it was very calm, but could be thought a little bit monotonous in some way. Also, giving more stress on important materials would have helped the concentration of the audiences.
• What did you like about the speech?
The topic was very interesting, and I liked the way she organized her speech. she first explained few myths and facts aginst them. then she introduces some methods to control anger. The speech was well organized that it was easy to understand the presentation.
< Vocal Variety Self - Evaluation>
ReplyDeleteTitle : Keep your anger under control
Speaker : Kim Choong Sil
Evaluator : 201303460 Sanghee Choi
• Topic Selection: (o)Facilitated vocal variety __Satisfactory __Could Improve
• Volume: __Excellent (o)Satisfactory __Too loud or soft
• Rate: (o)Excellent, varied __Satisfactory __Too fast or too slow
• Pitch: __Varied conversational __Satisfactory (o)Monotonous, artificial
• Quality: (o)Pleasant, friendly __Satisfactory __Harsh, monotonous
• Pauses: (o)Appropriate, effective __Satisfactory __Could Improve
• Expressiveness: __Conveyed emotion, meaning (o)Satisfactory __Could Improve
• Vocal Variety: __Enhanced speech __Satisfactory (o)Could Improve
• Organization: (o)Logical flow of ideas __Satisfactory __Should Improve
• Word Usage: (o)Vivid, descriptive, accurate __Satisfactory __Could Improve
• Body Language: (o)Natural, expressive __Satisfactory __Unnatural, distracting
• What could the speaker have done differently to make the speech more effective?
Her speech was great. But it was a little bit plain so she could use more vocal variety methods or put some pauses to make her speech more dynamic. For example, she could put more stress on the truth or solution part.
• What did you like about the speech?
The topic was interesting and useful and her ppt slides were very clear. I could learn some new facts that I misunderstood before. Also her speech was well organized so I could clearly understand what she wanted to say.
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ReplyDeleteTitle: Keep your anger under control
Evaluator: Lee Ji Young
Date: November 12.5
• Topic Selection: (o)Facilitated vocal variety __Satisfactory __Could Improve
• Volume: (o)Excellent __Satisfactory __Too loud or soft
• Rate: __Excellent, varied (o)Satisfactory __Too fast or too slow
• Pitch: __Varied conversational _0_Satisfactory Monotonous, artificial
• Quality: __Pleasant, friendly (o)Satisfactory __Harsh, monotonous
• Pauses: __Appropriate, effective (o)Satisfactory __Could Improve
• Expressiveness: _0_Conveyed emotion, meaning __Satisfactory Could Improve
• Vocal Variety: __Enhanced speech _0_Satisfactory Could Improve
• Organization: (o)Logical flow of ideas __Satisfactory __Should Improve
• Word Usage: (o)Vivid, descriptive, accurate __Satisfactory __Could Improve
• Body Language: __Natural, expressive (o)Satisfactory __Unnatural, distracting
• What could the speaker have done differently to make the speech more effective? ate more to make my speech powerful.
this was a informative speech that gives some tips to keep you from loosing temper. she made the presentation question and answer form and broke our common notion about anger. It made her presentation powerful.
• What did you like about the speech?
she memorized perfectly! and used body language properly. Also the content was quite useful, cause I'm the one who lost temper easily.
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ReplyDeleteTitle: Keep your anger under control
Evaluator: Kim Choong Sil
Date: December 7,2016
Topic Selection: _o_Facilitated vocal variety __Satisfactory __Could Improve
• Volume: _ _Excellent _o_Satisfactory __Too loud or soft
• Rate: __Excellent, varied _o_Satisfactory __Too fast or too slow
• Pitch: __Varied conversational _0_Satisfactory __Monotonous, artificial
• Quality: __Pleasant, friendly _0_Satisfactory __Harsh, monotonous
• Pauses: __Appropriate, effective _0_Satisfactory __Could Improve
• Expressiveness: _0_Conveyed emotion, meaning __Satisfactory __Could Improve
• Vocal Variety: __Enhanced speech __ Satisfactory _o_Could Improve
• Organization: _o_Logical flow of ideas __Satisfactory __Should Improve
• Word Usage: __Vivid, descriptive, accurate _0_Satisfactory __Could Improve
• Body Language: __Natural, expressive __ Satisfactory _o_Unnatural, distracting
What could the speaker have done differently to make the speech more effective?
While presenting this talk, I thought I used vocal variety fairly good, but I realized I could do that better watching this video. For example, I could raise my pitch for question mark. Also I looked in this video too serious, I should have smiled more in front of my audience. Gestures are not natural as much as I expected.
What did you like about the speech?
I didn’t rely on notes. Also I’m pretty sure that the audience didn’t have difficulties understanding my presentation, because I tried to use daily-life words. Before I gave a talk, I studied about the anger. Because I knew well about my own topic, my voice sounds quite confident